release-info: updates, fix review comments

Signed-off-by: Martin Borg <martin.borg@enea.com>
Signed-off-by: Nora Björklund <nora.bjorklund@enea.com>

3 files changed, 24 insertions, 39 deletions

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/about_release.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
index 1073988..c497c45 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@
 
         <tbody>
           <row>
-            <entry><para>Source code, recipes, scripts, etc for building the
-            distro and SDKs. See <xref
+            <entry><para>Source code, recipes and scripts for building the
+            distribution and SDKs. See <xref
             linkend="relinfo-getting-enea-linux" />.</para></entry>
           </row>
 
@@ -165,27 +165,36 @@
           </row>
 
           <row>
-            <entry>Poky source</entry>
+            <entry>Poky</entry>
 
+            <entry>
+              <para>Git commit id:</para>
+              <para>75ca53211488a3e268037a44ee2a7ac5c7181bd2</para>
+            </entry>
+
+            <remark>
+            The auto-fetched version is not correct unless the EL release is
+            based on a Yocto release tag.
             <entry><xi:include href="../../s_docsrc_common/pardoc-distro.xml"
             xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
             xpointer="element(Poky_VER/1)" /><remark>INFO: Auto-fetched from
             poky.ent via pardoc-distro.xml</remark></entry>
+            </remark>
           </row>
 
           <row>
-            <entry>GCC version</entry>
+            <entry>GCC</entry>
 
             <entry>5.3<remark>was EneaLinux_GCC_VER Not in poky.ent
             </remark></entry>
           </row>
 
           <row>
-            <entry>Linux kernel version<remark>was EneaLinux_KERNEL_VER Not in
+            <entry>Linux kernel<remark>was EneaLinux_KERNEL_VER Not in
             poky.ent</remark></entry>
 
             <entry><para>3.12 (P2041RDB &amp; LS1021a-IoT)</para><para>4.4
-            (QEmu targets)</para></entry>
+            (QEMU targets)</para></entry>
           </row>
 
           <row>
@@ -216,7 +225,7 @@
 
           <thead valign="bottom">
             <row>
-              <entry>Type of Packages and Provider</entry>
+              <entry>Type of Packages</entry>
 
               <entry>Reference</entry>
             </row>
@@ -224,7 +233,7 @@
 
           <tbody>
             <row>
-              <entry>Packages in Enea Linux images</entry>
+              <entry>Packages in Enea Linux</entry>
 
               <entry><para>See the <olink
               targetdoc="book_enea_linux_open_source"
@@ -243,15 +252,6 @@
               class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Eclipse Open Source
               Report</olink></para></entry>
             </row>
-
-            <row>
-              <entry>Packages provided by Yocto</entry>
-
-              <entry><para>See the Yocto "Release Notes" <xi:include
-              href="../../s_docsrc_common/pardoc-distro.xml"
-              xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
-              xpointer="element(ULINK_YOCTO_RELEASE_NOTES/1)" /></para></entry>
-            </row>
           </tbody>
         </tgroup>
       </informaltable></para>
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
index b045ebc..0b86eed 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
@@ -5,29 +5,18 @@
   <title>Known Problems in This Release</title>
 
   <para>The open source projects are continuously working on correcting
-  reported problems. Corrections to bugs detected by Enea have been
-  upstreamed, and the corrections been included in Enea Linux regardless of
+  reported problems. Corrections to bugs detected by Enea are submitted
+  upstream, and the corrections are included in Enea Linux regardless of
   when they will be included by the open source project. Remaining issues are
-  listed below, and workarounds to some of the problems are described in
-  chapter <emphasis>Troubleshooting</emphasis> in the <olink
-  targetdoc="book_enea_linux_users_guide"
-  targetptr="book_enea_linux_users_guide"><trademark
-  class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux User's Guide</olink>.</para>
+  listed below.</para>
 
   <section id="bugs-limitations-yocto">
     <title>Yocto</title>
 
-    <para>Open source projects often use bug databases for much more than
-    tracking bugs. The Yocto Project's Bugzilla database also functions as a
-    feature tracking program, both for the current release and for future
-    releases, and a way to track non-software issues, like documentation
-    changes.</para>
-
-    <para>The following page shows a sampling of the database: <ulink
-    url="https://www.yoctoproject.org/tools-resources/bugs">https://www.yoctoproject.org/tools-resources/bugs</ulink>.</para>
-
-    <para>For the full database, visit <ulink
-    url="https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org">https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org</ulink>.</para>
+    <para>The Yocto Project community uses a Bugzilla database to track
+    information on reported bugs and other issues:
+    <ulink url="https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org">
+    https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org</ulink>.</para>
   </section>
 
   <section condition="hidden" id="bugs-limitations-sdk">
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
index d834183..223aa42 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
@@ -31,10 +31,6 @@
         <para>New targets: LS1021a-IoT &amp; QEMUX86.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
-
-    <para>For details, see the Git logs for the repositories specified in the
-    manifest files. See <xref linkend="relinfo-getting-source" /> for more inf
-    on repos and the manifest.</para>
   </section>
 
   <section condition="hidden" id="relinfo-fixed">