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author | Robert P. J. Day <rpjday@crashcourse.ca> | 2012-12-26 08:24:41 -0600 |
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committer | Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org> | 2013-01-07 14:43:28 +0000 |
commit | 4c582a8b2ef3738902089e1a563bce53a85f1aa8 (patch) | |
tree | 90e7cf0212c4f485550ea992c6a1c1999a562d92 /documentation/dev-manual | |
parent | 30c0c9e35879cd66a8e8b4dbcc3421e9b962bb27 (diff) | |
download | poky-4c582a8b2ef3738902089e1a563bce53a85f1aa8.tar.gz |
dev-manual: Various fixes for links, typos, and grammar
1. Added "Debian" as a distribution for best results.
2. Fixed a link to the Hob page and two links for the
Build Appliance.
3. Three typos fixed and a few grammar items fixed.
(From yocto-docs rev: 0b381094ed9cc2d66895d4ad7c63005c8a918eb1)
Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
Diffstat (limited to 'documentation/dev-manual')
-rw-r--r-- | documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml | 6 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml | 12 | ||||
-rw-r--r-- | documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml | 4 |
3 files changed, 11 insertions, 11 deletions
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml index d7b589f187..b353532830 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml | |||
@@ -119,15 +119,15 @@ | |||
119 | Release Notes</ulink>:</emphasis> Features, updates and known issues for the current | 119 | Release Notes</ulink>:</emphasis> Features, updates and known issues for the current |
120 | release of the Yocto Project.</para></listitem> | 120 | release of the Yocto Project.</para></listitem> |
121 | <listitem><para><emphasis> | 121 | <listitem><para><emphasis> |
122 | <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/projects/hob'> | 122 | <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/tools-resources/projects/hob'> |
123 | Hob</ulink>:</emphasis> A graphical user interface for BitBake. | 123 | Hob</ulink>:</emphasis> A graphical user interface for BitBake. |
124 | Hob's primary goal is to enable a user to perform common tasks more easily.</para></listitem> | 124 | Hob's primary goal is to enable a user to perform common tasks more easily.</para></listitem> |
125 | <listitem><para><emphasis> | 125 | <listitem><para><emphasis> |
126 | <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation/build-appliance'> | 126 | <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/download/build-appliance-0'> |
127 | Build Appliance</ulink>:</emphasis> A bootable custom embedded Linux image you can | 127 | Build Appliance</ulink>:</emphasis> A bootable custom embedded Linux image you can |
128 | either build using a non-Linux development system (VMware applications) or download | 128 | either build using a non-Linux development system (VMware applications) or download |
129 | from the Yocto Project website. | 129 | from the Yocto Project website. |
130 | See the <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation/build-appliance'>Build Appliance</ulink> | 130 | See the <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation/build-appliance-manual'>Build Appliance</ulink> |
131 | page for more information.</para></listitem> | 131 | page for more information.</para></listitem> |
132 | <listitem><para><emphasis> | 132 | <listitem><para><emphasis> |
133 | <ulink url='&YOCTO_BUGZILLA_URL;'>Bugzilla</ulink>:</emphasis> | 133 | <ulink url='&YOCTO_BUGZILLA_URL;'>Bugzilla</ulink>:</emphasis> |
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml index e09c373da2..65e17e24a0 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml | |||
@@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ | |||
97 | <para> | 97 | <para> |
98 | Most teams have many pieces of software undergoing active development at any given time. | 98 | Most teams have many pieces of software undergoing active development at any given time. |
99 | You can derive large benefits by putting these pieces under the control of a source | 99 | You can derive large benefits by putting these pieces under the control of a source |
100 | control system that is compatible (i.e. Git or Subversion (SVN)) with the OpenEmbeded | 100 | control system that is compatible (i.e. Git or Subversion (SVN)) with the OpenEmbedded |
101 | build system that the Yocto Project uses. | 101 | build system that the Yocto Project uses. |
102 | You can then set the autobuilder to pull the latest revisions of the packages | 102 | You can then set the autobuilder to pull the latest revisions of the packages |
103 | and test the latest commits by the builds. | 103 | and test the latest commits by the builds. |
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ | |||
131 | <listitem><para>Maintain your metadata in layers that make sense | 131 | <listitem><para>Maintain your metadata in layers that make sense |
132 | for your situation. | 132 | for your situation. |
133 | See the "<link linkend='understanding-and-creating-layers'>Understanding | 133 | See the "<link linkend='understanding-and-creating-layers'>Understanding |
134 | and Creating Layeres</link>" section for more information on | 134 | and Creating Layers</link>" section for more information on |
135 | layers.</para></listitem> | 135 | layers.</para></listitem> |
136 | <listitem><para>Separate the project's metadata and code by using | 136 | <listitem><para>Separate the project's metadata and code by using |
137 | separate Git repositories. | 137 | separate Git repositories. |
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ | |||
187 | </para> | 187 | </para> |
188 | 188 | ||
189 | <para> | 189 | <para> |
190 | Once you are set up through either tarball extraction or creation of Git repositories, | 190 | Once you are set up through either tarball extraction or a checkout of Git repositories, |
191 | you are ready to develop. | 191 | you are ready to develop. |
192 | </para> | 192 | </para> |
193 | 193 | ||
@@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ | |||
362 | In its most general sense, it is an open-source project that was initially developed | 362 | In its most general sense, it is an open-source project that was initially developed |
363 | by OpenedHand. With OpenedHand, poky was developed off of the existing OpenEmbedded | 363 | by OpenedHand. With OpenedHand, poky was developed off of the existing OpenEmbedded |
364 | build system becoming a build system for embedded images. | 364 | build system becoming a build system for embedded images. |
365 | After Intel Corporation aquired OpenedHand, the project poky became the basis for | 365 | After Intel Corporation acquired OpenedHand, the project poky became the basis for |
366 | the Yocto Project's build system. | 366 | the Yocto Project's build system. |
367 | Within the Yocto Project source repositories, poky exists as a separate Git repository | 367 | Within the Yocto Project source repositories, poky exists as a separate Git repository |
368 | that can be cloned to yield a local copy on the host system. | 368 | that can be cloned to yield a local copy on the host system. |
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ | |||
380 | and unpacking a Yocto Project release tarball or creating a local copy of | 380 | and unpacking a Yocto Project release tarball or creating a local copy of |
381 | the <filename>poky</filename> Git repository | 381 | the <filename>poky</filename> Git repository |
382 | <filename>git://git.yoctoproject.org/poky</filename>. | 382 | <filename>git://git.yoctoproject.org/poky</filename>. |
383 | Sometimes you might here the term "poky directory" used to refer to this | 383 | Sometimes you might hear the term "poky directory" used to refer to this |
384 | directory structure. | 384 | directory structure. |
385 | <note> | 385 | <note> |
386 | The OpenEmbedded build system does not support file or directory names that | 386 | The OpenEmbedded build system does not support file or directory names that |
@@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ | |||
422 | reflects the exact copy of the files at the time of their release. | 422 | reflects the exact copy of the files at the time of their release. |
423 | You do this by using Git tags that are part of the repository.</para> | 423 | You do this by using Git tags that are part of the repository.</para> |
424 | 424 | ||
425 | <para>For more information on concepts around Git repositories, branches, and tags, | 425 | <para>For more information on concepts related to Git repositories, branches, and tags, |
426 | see the | 426 | see the |
427 | "<link linkend='repositories-tags-and-branches'>Repositories, Tags, and Branches</link>" | 427 | "<link linkend='repositories-tags-and-branches'>Repositories, Tags, and Branches</link>" |
428 | section.</para></listitem> | 428 | section.</para></listitem> |
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml index 299a02d581..b9401e9017 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml | |||
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ | |||
53 | <listitem><para><emphasis>Host System:</emphasis> You should have a reasonably current | 53 | <listitem><para><emphasis>Host System:</emphasis> You should have a reasonably current |
54 | Linux-based host system. | 54 | Linux-based host system. |
55 | You will have the best results with a recent release of Fedora, | 55 | You will have the best results with a recent release of Fedora, |
56 | OpenSUSE, Ubuntu, or CentOS as these releases are frequently tested against the Yocto Project | 56 | OpenSUSE, Debian, Ubuntu, or CentOS as these releases are frequently tested against the Yocto Project |
57 | and officially supported. | 57 | and officially supported. |
58 | For a list of the distributions under validation and their status, see the | 58 | For a list of the distributions under validation and their status, see the |
59 | "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#detailed-supported-distros'>Supported Linux Distributions</ulink>" section | 59 | "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#detailed-supported-distros'>Supported Linux Distributions</ulink>" section |
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ | |||
70 | for the supported distributions.</para></listitem> | 70 | for the supported distributions.</para></listitem> |
71 | <listitem id='local-yp-release'><para><emphasis>Yocto Project Release:</emphasis> | 71 | <listitem id='local-yp-release'><para><emphasis>Yocto Project Release:</emphasis> |
72 | You need a release of the Yocto Project. | 72 | You need a release of the Yocto Project. |
73 | You set up a with local <link linkend='source-directory'>Source Directory</link> | 73 | You set that up with a local <link linkend='source-directory'>Source Directory</link> |
74 | one of two ways depending on whether you | 74 | one of two ways depending on whether you |
75 | are going to contribute back into the Yocto Project or not. | 75 | are going to contribute back into the Yocto Project or not. |
76 | <note> | 76 | <note> |