From 4c582a8b2ef3738902089e1a563bce53a85f1aa8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: "Robert P. J. Day" Date: Wed, 26 Dec 2012 08:24:41 -0600 Subject: dev-manual: Various fixes for links, typos, and grammar 1. Added "Debian" as a distribution for best results. 2. Fixed a link to the Hob page and two links for the Build Appliance. 3. Three typos fixed and a few grammar items fixed. (From yocto-docs rev: 0b381094ed9cc2d66895d4ad7c63005c8a918eb1) Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie --- documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml | 6 +++--- documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml | 12 ++++++------ documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml | 4 ++-- 3 files changed, 11 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-) (limited to 'documentation/dev-manual') diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml index d7b589f187..b353532830 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml @@ -119,15 +119,15 @@ Release Notes: Features, updates and known issues for the current release of the Yocto Project. - + Hob: A graphical user interface for BitBake. Hob's primary goal is to enable a user to perform common tasks more easily. - + Build Appliance: A bootable custom embedded Linux image you can either build using a non-Linux development system (VMware applications) or download from the Yocto Project website. - See the Build Appliance + See the Build Appliance page for more information. Bugzilla: diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml index e09c373da2..65e17e24a0 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-newbie.xml @@ -97,7 +97,7 @@ Most teams have many pieces of software undergoing active development at any given time. You can derive large benefits by putting these pieces under the control of a source - control system that is compatible (i.e. Git or Subversion (SVN)) with the OpenEmbeded + control system that is compatible (i.e. Git or Subversion (SVN)) with the OpenEmbedded build system that the Yocto Project uses. You can then set the autobuilder to pull the latest revisions of the packages and test the latest commits by the builds. @@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ Maintain your metadata in layers that make sense for your situation. See the "Understanding - and Creating Layeres" section for more information on + and Creating Layers" section for more information on layers. Separate the project's metadata and code by using separate Git repositories. @@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ - Once you are set up through either tarball extraction or creation of Git repositories, + Once you are set up through either tarball extraction or a checkout of Git repositories, you are ready to develop. @@ -362,7 +362,7 @@ In its most general sense, it is an open-source project that was initially developed by OpenedHand. With OpenedHand, poky was developed off of the existing OpenEmbedded build system becoming a build system for embedded images. - After Intel Corporation aquired OpenedHand, the project poky became the basis for + After Intel Corporation acquired OpenedHand, the project poky became the basis for the Yocto Project's build system. Within the Yocto Project source repositories, poky exists as a separate Git repository that can be cloned to yield a local copy on the host system. @@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ and unpacking a Yocto Project release tarball or creating a local copy of the poky Git repository git://git.yoctoproject.org/poky. - Sometimes you might here the term "poky directory" used to refer to this + Sometimes you might hear the term "poky directory" used to refer to this directory structure. The OpenEmbedded build system does not support file or directory names that @@ -422,7 +422,7 @@ reflects the exact copy of the files at the time of their release. You do this by using Git tags that are part of the repository. - For more information on concepts around Git repositories, branches, and tags, + For more information on concepts related to Git repositories, branches, and tags, see the "Repositories, Tags, and Branches" section. diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml index 299a02d581..b9401e9017 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml @@ -53,7 +53,7 @@ Host System: You should have a reasonably current Linux-based host system. You will have the best results with a recent release of Fedora, - OpenSUSE, Ubuntu, or CentOS as these releases are frequently tested against the Yocto Project + OpenSUSE, Debian, Ubuntu, or CentOS as these releases are frequently tested against the Yocto Project and officially supported. For a list of the distributions under validation and their status, see the "Supported Linux Distributions" section @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ for the supported distributions. Yocto Project Release: You need a release of the Yocto Project. - You set up a with local Source Directory + You set that up with a local Source Directory one of two ways depending on whether you are going to contribute back into the Yocto Project or not. -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf