Updated Release Information document

3 files changed, 75 insertions, 30 deletions

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/about_release.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
index 383f4f2..a844e40 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@
   <para>Enea NFV Access <xi:include href="eltf_params_updated.xml"
   xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
   xpointer="element(EneaLinux_REL_VER/1)" /> adds support for Element ODM
-  integration and updates certain components for better
-  performance.<remark>INFO <emphasis
+  integration, improves perfomrance and provides a better onboarding
+  experience.<remark>INFO <emphasis
   role="bold">eltf_params_updated.xml</emphasis> contains many parameters in
   the book, also in the open source books, and MUST be created FROM <emphasis
   role="bold">eltf_params_template.xml</emphasis>. The parameters are
@@ -43,6 +43,7 @@
                           kernel modules */
                         -- various artifacts
         -- qemux86-64
+           /* artifacts for the guest side */
                 -- deb/
                    /* deb packages */
                 -- images/
@@ -89,17 +90,20 @@
     <title>Supported Host Environment</title>
 
     <para>The following environments have been validated as host environments
-    for Enea NFV Access 1.0: <emphasis role="bold">Ubuntu 16.04 LTS,
+    for Enea NFV Access 1.1: <emphasis role="bold">Ubuntu 16.04 LTS,
     64bit</emphasis>.</para>
 
-    <para><remark>Hardcoded now in this XML file. Might be moved to the
-    parameter file later.</remark><remark>INFO Below is a complete section
-    with ID "eltf-target-tables-section" included from
-    elft_params_updated.xml. It contains a variable number of target tables
-    and the section title should be "Supported Targets with Parameters". It
-    has have a short sentence about what it is in the beginning. The subtitles
-    shall have the directory name of the target in the
-    manifest.</remark></para>
+    <para>
+      <remark>Hardcoded now in this XML file. Might be moved to the parameter
+      file later.</remark>
+
+      <remark>INFO Below is a complete section with ID
+      "eltf-target-tables-section" included from elft_params_updated.xml. It
+      contains a variable number of target tables and the section title should
+      be "Supported Targets with Parameters". It has have a short sentence
+      about what it is in the beginning. The subtitles shall have the
+      directory name of the target in the manifest.</remark>
+    </para>
 
     <para>For more details on system requirements and how to configure the
     host environment, please see <xref
@@ -117,10 +121,11 @@
     applications for both the host and the guest targets on an x86_64
     machine.</para>
 
-    <para><remark>(Possibly add this in later) See the <trademark
-    class="registered">Enea</trademark> NFV Access Application Development
-    Guide for information on how to build and install a
-    toolchain.</remark></para>
+    <para>
+      <remark>(Possibly add this in later) See the <trademark
+      class="registered">Enea</trademark> NFV Access Application Development
+      Guide for information on how to build and install a toolchain.</remark>
+    </para>
   </section>
 
   <section id="relinfo-documentation">
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/getting_enea_nfv_access.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/getting_enea_nfv_access.xml
index ecc9d65..d75390a 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/getting_enea_nfv_access.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/getting_enea_nfv_access.xml
@@ -10,21 +10,22 @@
   Download Portal</ulink>. Log in using the credentials provided by
   Enea.</para>
 
-  <para>Using the menu at the top, browse to the NFV section, which will
-  provide access to a <literal>Files</literal> section and an <literal>Online
-  Documentation</literal> section. The <literal>Files</literal> section lists
-  each Enea NFV release version as a separate download package. Clicking on
-  any of the release packages will provide further details such as the date
-  when it was made available, the file size and the changelog. Most
-  importantly, it provides access to the download links.</para>
+  <para>Using the menu at the top, browse to the <literal>NFV
+  </literal>section, which will provide access to a <literal>Files</literal>
+  section and an <literal>Online Documentation</literal> section. The
+  <literal>Files</literal> section lists each Enea NFV Access release version
+  as a separate download package. Clicking on any of the release packages will
+  provide further details such as the date when it was made available, the
+  file size and the changelog. Most importantly, it provides access to the
+  download links.</para>
 
   <para>Each archive is mirrored in several places, geographically. Choose the
   archive in the region closest to you for better download speeds. For details
   about the contents of the release package, please refer to section <xref
-  linkend="release-content"/>.</para>
+  linkend="release-content" />.</para>
 
   <para>The <literal>Online documentation</literal> section provides quick
   access to the documents delivered with the release. For details about the
   books delivered and their purpose, please refer to <xref
-  linkend="relinfo-documentation"/>.</para>
+  linkend="relinfo-documentation" />.</para>
 </chapter>
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diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
index f032b65..e2f6c6f 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
@@ -13,21 +13,60 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
+        <para>Updated DPDK to version 17.08 and OVS to version 2.8 for
+        improved perfomrance</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+        <para>VCPE characteristics optimizations</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
         <para>Added support for integrating Element ODM</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Updated the DPDK package to version x.x</para>
+        <para>Added support for Edgelink Netconf (beta)</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Updated the ODP package to version y.y</para>
+        <para>Included tools for easier installation</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Enhanced tool-set on development image (python-pip, dosfstools,
+        htop, etc.)</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Unified cross-development SDK for host and virtualized
+        environments</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Native toolchain support in the development image</para>
       </listitem>
-    </itemizedlist>
 
-    <para>For details, see the Git logs for the repositories specified in the
-    manifest files. See <xref linkend="relinfo-getting-enea-nfv-access"/> for
-    more information on repos and the manifest.</para>
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Removed OFP</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Improved manuals and documentation</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Improved evaluation experience</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Various bug fixes</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
+        <para>Security updates</para>
+      </listitem>
+    </itemizedlist>
   </section>
 
   <section id="packages">