Updated minor edits for Getting Started, more to come.

Updated the relnotes with comments from dape,
and a new limitation.

Change-Id: Ifc41780ed5d595a72d5fe1d82feb2514a0481210
Signed-off-by: mrpa <miruna.paun@enea.com>

2 files changed, 16 insertions, 15 deletions

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/installation_guide.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/installation_guide.xml
index 2e641a7..2590dec 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/installation_guide.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/installation_guide.xml
@@ -81,7 +81,7 @@
   <section id="sw_config">
     <title>Software Configuration</title>
 
-    <para>The CentOS 7 machine requires a specific configuration for the setup
+    <para>The CentOS 7 server requires a specific configuration for the setup
     to work.</para>
 
     <section id="firewall_config">
@@ -93,7 +93,9 @@
       clients. Quick handling of a blocking firewall would be to disable it,
       typical for a lab environment, through:</para>
 
-      <programlisting>sudo service firewalld stop</programlisting>
+      <programlisting>sudo systemctl stop firewalld
+sudo systemctl disable firewalld
+sudo systemctl mask -now firewalld</programlisting>
 
       <para>For an advanced firewall configuration, the following ports need
       to be opened:</para>
@@ -460,7 +462,7 @@ Enea_NFV_Access_uCPEManager_&lt;version&gt;-build&lt;build_number&gt;.tar.gz</pr
                   </listitem>
 
                   <listitem>
-                    <para>Specify the database server port:
+                    <para>Specify the database server port
                     <literal>[5432]</literal></para>
                   </listitem>
 
@@ -470,12 +472,12 @@ Enea_NFV_Access_uCPEManager_&lt;version&gt;-build&lt;build_number&gt;.tar.gz</pr
                   </listitem>
 
                   <listitem>
-                    <para>Specify database password:
+                    <para>Specify database password
                     <literal>[postgres]</literal></para>
                   </listitem>
 
                   <listitem>
-                    <para>Specify database startup thread pool size:
+                    <para>Specify database startup thread pool size
                     <literal>[1]</literal></para>
                   </listitem>
                 </itemizedlist>
@@ -486,13 +488,13 @@ Enea_NFV_Access_uCPEManager_&lt;version&gt;-build&lt;build_number&gt;.tar.gz</pr
 
                 <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
                   <listitem>
-                    <para>Specify service username:
-                    <literal>ucpemanager</literal>.</para>
+                    <para>Specify service username
+                    [<literal>ucpemanager</literal>]</para>
                   </listitem>
 
                   <listitem>
-                    <para>Specify service password:
-                    <literal>ucpemanager</literal>.</para>
+                    <para>Specify service password
+                    <literal>[ucpemanager</literal>]</para>
                   </listitem>
                 </itemizedlist>
               </listitem>
@@ -503,7 +505,7 @@ Enea_NFV_Access_uCPEManager_&lt;version&gt;-build&lt;build_number&gt;.tar.gz</pr
                 <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
                   <listitem>
                     <para>Specify the IP address of the local interface: The
-                    CentOS 7 loopback address:
+                    CentOS 7 Server loopback address:
                     <literal>127.0.0.1</literal>.</para>
                   </listitem>
 
@@ -520,8 +522,7 @@ Enea_NFV_Access_uCPEManager_&lt;version&gt;-build&lt;build_number&gt;.tar.gz</pr
                 <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
                   <listitem>
                     <para>Please enter the new Maximum Heap Size: <literal>4
-                    GB</literal>.<remark>Is this value
-                    accurate?</remark></para>
+                    GB</literal>.</para>
                   </listitem>
                 </itemizedlist>
               </listitem>
@@ -551,8 +552,8 @@ Enea_NFV_Access_uCPEManager_&lt;version&gt;-build&lt;build_number&gt;.tar.gz</pr
           </listitem>
 
           <listitem>
-            <para>Open the IP Address of the CentOS 7 in a web browser on the
-            laptop and log in with the username and password:
+            <para>Open the IP Address of the CentOS 7 Server in a web browser
+            on the laptop and log in with the username and password:
             <literal>admin</literal>/<literal>admin</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
         </orderedlist>
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/introduction.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/introduction.xml
index 7a2f01e..0509566 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/introduction.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-getting-started/doc/introduction.xml
@@ -55,7 +55,7 @@
     xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
     xpointer="element(book_enea_nfv_access_auto_fw_th_user_guide/1)" />.</para>
 
-    <para> Details concerning release content, including documentation
+    <para>Details concerning release content, including documentation
     structure, are provided in the <xi:include
     href="../../s_docbuild/olinkdb/pardoc-common.xml"
     xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"