1 files changed, 25 insertions, 37 deletions

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
index 4c123da..76487ef 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
@@ -14,12 +14,11 @@
     <title>Getting Pre-built Binaries</title>
 
     <para>Enea Linux pre-built binaries are available for download on <ulink
-    url="https://portal.enea.com/login/?redirect_to=https%3A%2F%2Fportal.enea.com%2F">Enea
-    Download Portal</ulink>. Log in using the credentials provided. Using the
-    menu, browse to the <emphasis role="bold">Linux</emphasis> section. You
-    will now have access to the <emphasis role="bold">Files</emphasis> section
-    and the <emphasis role="bold">Online Documentation</emphasis>
-    section.</para>
+    url="https://portal.enea.com/login/?redirect_to=https%3A%2F%2Fportal.enea.com%2F">portal.enea.com</ulink>.
+    Log in using the credentials provided by Enea for your user account. Using
+    the menu, browse to the Linux section where you will now have access to
+    the <emphasis role="bold">Files</emphasis> and <emphasis
+    role="bold">Online Documentation</emphasis> sections.</para>
 
     <para>The Files section lists each Enea Linux distribution, one for each
     version and profile, as a separate download package. Clicking on the name
@@ -42,8 +41,8 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para><emphasis>rpm</emphasis> directory &ndash; this directory
-        contains all the packages included in the distribution in rpm format,
+        <para><emphasis>deb</emphasis> directory &ndash; this directory
+        contains all the packages included in the distribution in deb format,
         which can be installed using the package manager.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -56,17 +55,10 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux Platform Developer&rsquo;s
-        Guide</emphasis> -intended for Enea Linux platform developers, who
-        want to configure and build customized Linux kernel images for
-        embedded system targets, using the Yocto configuration and build
-        system.</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux Application Developer's
-        Guide</emphasis> - dedicated to Enea Linux application developers, who
-        want to build and run applications.</para>
+        <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux User&rsquo;s Guide</emphasis> -
+        intended for Enea Linux platform developers, who want to configure and
+        build customized Linux kernel images for embedded system targets,
+        using the Yocto configuration and build system.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -76,13 +68,6 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux Eclipse Open Source
-        Report</emphasis> - contains the open source and license information
-        pertaining to the Eclipse package provided with this release of Enea
-        Linux.</para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
         <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux Release Info</emphasis> -
         provides information about the current released distribution for a
         selected set of targets, along with installation requirements and
@@ -97,13 +82,13 @@
     <para>Enea Linux sources are available for cloning from a set of Git
     repositories on <ulink url="https://git.enea.com">git.enea.com</ulink>.
     Since Enea Linux requires multiple repositories, Google Repo tool is used
-    in order to manage configurations and make the cloning step simpler.
+    in order to manage configurations and make the cloning step simpler. The
     Google Repo tool uses files, known as manifests, which store a list of
     tuples (repository URL, version). The Repo tool is then used to traverse
     the list of tuples in the manifest file and clone the specified versions
     of each repository. See <ulink
-    url="https://code.google.com/p/git-repo/">https://code.google.com/p/git-repo/</ulink>
-    for more info.</para>
+    url="https://code.google.com/p/git-repo/">Google Code Archive for
+    git-repo</ulink>, for more info.</para>
 
     <section id="getting-source-code-step-one">
       <title>Get access to git.enea.com</title>
@@ -118,8 +103,9 @@
 
           <programlisting>$ ssh-keygen -t rsa</programlisting>
 
-          <para>When asked for a password, just press Enter. This will create
-          two files in the .ssh directory in your home directory.</para>
+          <para>When asked for a password, just press
+          <command>Enter</command>. This will create two files in the
+          <literal>.ssh</literal> directory in your home directory.</para>
 
           <programlisting>id_rsa
 id_rsa.pub</programlisting>
@@ -133,9 +119,11 @@ id_rsa.pub</programlisting>
       </orderedlist>
 
       <para>Once these steps are done and you have a valid ssh key pair, send
-      the public key, <emphasis>id_rsa.pub</emphasis>, via email to
-      <email>mailto:git_support@list.enea.se</email> in order to get access to
-      <ulink url="https://git.enea.com">git.enea.com</ulink>.</para>
+      the public key,
+      <emphasis><emphasis><filename>id_rsa.pub</filename></emphasis></emphasis>,
+      via email to <email>mailto:git_support@list.enea.se</email> in order to
+      get access to <ulink
+      url="https://git.enea.com">git.enea.com</ulink>.</para>
     </section>
 
     <section id="getting-source-code-step-two">
@@ -157,7 +145,7 @@ id_rsa.pub</programlisting>
         </listitem>
 
         <listitem>
-          <para>Define the MACHINE from one of the targets listed
+          <para>Define the MACHINE to the following target listed
           here:<remark>Below is the "machine_list" programlisting in
           machine_list_generated.xml created by the make system by extracting
           from the manifest</remark></para>
@@ -178,11 +166,11 @@ id_rsa.pub</programlisting>
 
       <para>Once the source code is downloaded, the current directory will
       contain a README file with instructions on how to build the distro and
-      boot the machine you choose. For ease of use, these instructions are
+      boot the raspberry pi machine. For ease of use, these instructions are
       also copied into this document, see <xref
       linkend="relinfo-build-boot" />.</para>
 
-      <para>It's not necessary to explicitly clone the manifest repository
+      <para>It is not necessary to explicitly clone the manifest repository
       since that is done automatically by the repo tool. To see the current
       manifest, use the following command:</para>