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| author | Sona Sarmadi <sona.sarmadi@enea.com> | 2018-08-02 08:05:54 +0200 |
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| committer | Sona Sarmadi <sona.sarmadi@enea.com> | 2018-08-02 13:29:41 +0200 |
| commit | 15166351465432394bc6a75af5fe2499366921c6 (patch) | |
| tree | eebb4041a9208d2c5035908a40b9442402106265 /doc/docsrc_common | |
| parent | ddccea54b0fc621d293098e83a44202c90cf8a26 (diff) | |
| download | el_releases-standard-15166351465432394bc6a75af5fe2499366921c6.tar.gz | |
Fixed Miruna's review comments
1. Do we explain what the $MACHINE variable is anywhere or how to set it even
if we only have one machine in this release?
2. in 5.1.2 after step 2 (Source the build environment) there are two notes,
would you please make the first note into a para instead.
3. in 5.2.1 Boot via PXE using DHCP, TFTP, and NFS servers: In the first
itemizedlist, you have quotation marks around a server name and a path
marked by the literal tags, remove them please.
doc/book-enea-linux-user-guide/doc/using_enea_linux.xml
Line 186:
Rephrase to: "For the DHCP server, in addition to the general configuration,
the DHCPD configuration should contain an entry for the target with the
following information:"
Line 232:
Rephrase to: "For the TFTP server, the TFTP path to the target's pxelinux.0
file is given in the DHCP Configuration. Examples of files included in the TFTP
subdirectory indicated by the DHCP configuration are:"
Line 264:
"correctly"
Change-Id: I8ae5383e121d51aa508f1a76da9d0578a58a2431
Signed-off-by: Sona Sarmadi <sona.sarmadi@enea.com>
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