1 files changed, 58 insertions, 121 deletions

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/about_release.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
index 0f5e5e5..171a5fa 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
@@ -4,12 +4,16 @@
 <chapter id="relinfo-about-release">
   <title>About This Release</title>
 
-  <para>Enea NFV Access <xi:include href="eltf_params_updated.xml"
-  xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
-  xpointer="element(EneaLinux_REL_VER/1)" /> includes following
-  components:<remark>INFO <emphasis
-  role="bold">eltf_params_updated.xml</emphasis> contains many parameters in
-  the book, also in the open source books, and MUST be created FROM <emphasis
+  <para>This release of Enea NFV Access <xi:include
+  href="eltf_params_updated.xml" xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
+  xpointer="element(EneaLinux_REL_VER/1)" /> includes optimizations to the
+  FCAPS framework, DPDK, cross-developement on both an SDK and an eSDK,
+  USB-stick based installation options, and various other optimizations,
+  security patches and documentation updated accordingly.</para>
+
+  <para><remark> INFO <emphasis role="bold">eltf_params_updated.xml</emphasis>
+  contains many parameters in the book, also in the open source books, and
+  MUST be created FROM <emphasis
   role="bold">eltf_params_template.xml</emphasis>. The parameters are
   automatically used in the books, via xi:include statements, similar to how
   parameters from pardoc-distro.xml are included in the book. Read the file
@@ -17,84 +21,12 @@
   for important details about formats and how to do! The idea is that ELTF
   will auto-create/update it.</remark></para>
 
-  <itemizedlist>
-    <listitem>
-      <para>DPDK 18.02</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>OVS 2.9</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem condition="intel">
-      <para>Element ODM: FCAPS framework with NETCONF and Yang</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Edge Link Netconf (beta): NETCONF based VNF lifecycle Management
-      Tool</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Extended Tools Feature Set:</para>
-
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>python-pip</para>
-        </listitem>
-
-        <listitem>
-          <para>dosfstools</para>
-        </listitem>
-
-        <listitem>
-          <para>htop</para>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Unified cross-development SDK for host and virtualized
-      environments</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Native toolchain support on development image</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>USB-stick based installation</para>
-    </listitem>
-
-    <listitem>
-      <para>Product Maintenance:</para>
-
-      <itemizedlist>
-        <listitem>
-          <para>Optimizations</para>
-        </listitem>
-
-        <listitem>
-          <para>Security patches</para>
-        </listitem>
-
-        <listitem>
-          <para>Bug fixes</para>
-        </listitem>
-
-        <listitem>
-          <para>Updated documentation</para>
-        </listitem>
-      </itemizedlist>
-    </listitem>
-  </itemizedlist>
-
   <section id="release-content">
     <title>Enea NFV Access Release Content</title>
 
-    <para>The current release contains along with other items, documentation,
-    pre-built kernels and images, a bootloader and a SDK. The directory
-    structure is detailed below:</para>
+    <para>The current release contains documentation, prebuilt kernels and
+    images, a bootloader, an SDK and an eSDK. The directory structure is
+    detailed below:</para>
 
     <programlisting condition="intel">-- documentation/
    /* Enea NFV Access documentation */
@@ -185,9 +117,9 @@
     <para>For each combination of image and target, the following set of
     artifacts is available:</para>
 
-    <programlisting condition="arm">-- Image
+    <programlisting condition="intel">-- bzImage
    /* kernel image */
--- Image-target.bin
+-- bzImage-target.bin
    /* kernel image, same as above */
 -- config-target.config
    /* kernel configuration file */
@@ -200,11 +132,13 @@
 -- image-name-target.tar.gz
    /* tar archive of the image */
 -- modules-&lt;target&gt;.tgz
-   /* external kernel modules */</programlisting>
+   /* external kernel modules */
+-- grub-efi-bootx64.efi
+   /* GRUB EFI file */</programlisting>
 
-    <programlisting condition="intel">-- bzImage
+    <programlisting condition="arm">-- Image
    /* kernel image */
--- bzImage-target.bin
+-- Image-target.bin
    /* kernel image, same as above */
 -- config-target.config
    /* kernel configuration file */
@@ -217,9 +151,7 @@
 -- image-name-target.tar.gz
    /* tar archive of the image */
 -- modules-&lt;target&gt;.tgz
-   /* external kernel modules */
--- grub-efi-bootx64.efi
-   /* GRUB EFI file */</programlisting>
+   /* external kernel modules */</programlisting>
   </section>
 
   <section id="relinfo-supported-host-environment">
@@ -247,69 +179,74 @@
               xpointer="element(eltf-target-tables-section)" />
 
   <section id="relinfo-provided-sdk">
-    <title>Provided Toolchain(s) (SDK)</title>
+    <title>Provided Toolchains</title>
 
-    <para>The provided SDK contains toolchains supporting cross-compilation of
-    applications for both the host and the guest targets on an <filename
-    condition="arm">arm64</filename><filename
-    condition="intel">x86-64</filename> machine.</para>
-
-    <para><remark>(Possibly add this in later) See the <trademark
-    class="registered">Enea</trademark> NFV Access Application Development
-    Guide for information on how to build and install a
-    toolchain.</remark></para>
+    <para>The provided SDK and eSDK contain toolchains supporting
+    cross-compilation of applications for both the host and the guest targets
+    on an <filename condition="intel">x86-64</filename><filename
+    condition="arm">arm64</filename> machine.</para>
   </section>
 
   <section id="relinfo-documentation">
     <title>Provided Documentation</title>
 
-    <para>Enea NFV Access is provided with the following set of
+    <para>This release of Enea NFV Access contains the following set of
     documents:</para>
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Enea NFV Access Release Information - This document, describing
-        the Enea NFV Access release content.</para>
+        <para>Enea NFV Access Release Information. Describes the Enea NFV
+        Access release content.</para>
       </listitem>
 
-      <listitem>
-        <para>Enea NFV Access Guide - A document describing how to use Enea
-        NFV Access, as well as use cases and benchmark results.</para>
+      <listitem condition="intel">
+        <para><xi:include href="../../s_docbuild/olinkdb/pardoc-common.xml"
+        xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
+        xpointer="element(book_enea_nfv_access_guide_intel/1)" />. Describes
+        how to use Enea NFV Access, provides use cases and benchmark
+        results.</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem condition="arm">
+        <para><phrase><olink targetdoc="book_enea_nfv_access_guide">Enea NFV
+        Access Guide</olink></phrase>. Describes how to use Enea NFV Access,
+        provides use cases and benchmark results.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Enea NFV Access Open Source Report - A document containing the
+        <para><xi:include href="../../s_docbuild/olinkdb/pardoc-common.xml"
+        xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
+        xpointer="element(book_enea_nfv_access_open_source/1)" />. Contains
         open source and license information pertaining to packages provided
         with Enea NFV Access.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Enea NFV Access Development Open Source Report - A document
-        containing open source and license information pertaining to packages
-        provided with Enea NFV Access for application developers.</para>
+        <para>Enea NFV Access Development Open Source Report. Contains open
+        source and license information pertaining to packages provided with
+        Enea NFV Access for application developers.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Enea NFV Access Guest Open Source Report - A document containing
-        open source and license information concerning packages provided with
-        Enea NFV Access for a guest target.</para>
+        <para>Enea NFV Access Guest Open Source Report. Contains open source
+        and license information concerning packages provided with Enea NFV
+        Access for a guest target.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Enea NFV Access Guest Development Open Source Report - A
-        document detailing the open source and license information of packages
-        provided with Enea NFV Access for applications development on a guest
-        target.</para>
+        <para>Enea NFV Access Guest Development Open Source Report. Details
+        the open source and license information of packages provided with Enea
+        NFV Access for applications development on a guest target.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem condition="hidden">
-        <para>Enea NFV Access Test Report - The document that summarizes the
-        test results for the Enea NFV Access release.</para>
+        <para>Enea NFV Access Test Report. Summarizes the test results for the
+        Enea NFV Access release.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Enea NFV Access Security Report - The document that lists all
-        security fixes included in the Enea NFV Access release.</para>
+        <para>Enea NFV Access Security Report. Lists all security fixes
+        included in this release of Enea NFV Access.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
@@ -320,4 +257,4 @@
     <para>A detailed list of all security patches included with this release
     is available in the Enea NFV Access Security Report document.</para>
   </section>
-</chapter>
+</chapter>
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