1 files changed, 20 insertions, 43 deletions

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-example-usecases/doc/inband_management.xml b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-example-usecases/doc/inband_management.xml
index f28fc4e..3aea4f5 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-example-usecases/doc/inband_management.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-nfv-access-example-usecases/doc/inband_management.xml
@@ -14,12 +14,12 @@
     <mediaobject>
       <imageobject>
         <imagedata align="center" fileref="images/uc_ibm_solution.png"
-                   scale="50" />
+                   scale="55" />
       </imageobject>
     </mediaobject>
   </figure>
 
-  <para>Setup uses the following network configuration:</para>
+  <para>This Setup uses the following network configuration:</para>
 
   <itemizedlist>
     <listitem>
@@ -31,8 +31,8 @@
     </listitem>
   </itemizedlist>
 
-  <para>For prerequisites and further details, please see <xref
-  linkend="inband_management" /> and <xref linkend="vnf_fortigate" />.</para>
+  <para>For prerequisites and further details, please see <xref linkend="inband_management" /> 
+    and <xref linkend="vnf_fortigate" /><remark>Are these references still valid?</remark>.</para>
 
   <section id="mg_activation">
     <title>In-band management activation for FortiGate VNF
@@ -110,17 +110,6 @@
             <literal>ovs-bridge-type</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
-
-        <figure>
-          <title>Bind LAN physical port to dpdk</title>
-
-          <mediaobject>
-            <imageobject>
-              <imagedata align="center"
-                         fileref="images/uc_ibm_dpdk_int_bind.png" scale="75" />
-            </imageobject>
-          </mediaobject>
-        </figure>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -128,17 +117,17 @@
 
         <itemizedlist>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Select the <literal>Device.</literal></para>
+            <para>Select the <literal>Device</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
 
           <listitem>
             <para>In the Configuration menu select
-            <literal>OpenVSwitch.</literal></para>
+            <literal>OpenVSwitch</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
 
           <listitem>
             <para>Open the <literal>Bridges</literal> menu and click
-            <literal>Add.</literal></para>
+            <literal>Add</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
 
@@ -168,7 +157,7 @@
 
         <note>
           <para>The WAN port of the very first VNF instantiated on the device
-          must be connected to the <literal>ibm-wan-br bridge</literal>. All
+          must be connected to the <literal>ibm-wan-br</literal>bridge. All
           other VNFs must be connected in chain with the first VNF.</para>
         </note>
       </listitem>
@@ -178,7 +167,7 @@
 
         <itemizedlist>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Select the <literal>Device.</literal></para>
+            <para>Select the <literal>Device</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
 
           <listitem>
@@ -195,18 +184,6 @@
             pressing the <literal>Send</literal> button.</para>
           </listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
-
-        <figure>
-          <title>Onboard Fortigate VNF</title>
-
-          <mediaobject>
-            <imageobject>
-              <imagedata align="center"
-                         fileref="images/uc_ibm_fortigate_onboard.png"
-                         scale="50" />
-            </imageobject>
-          </mediaobject>
-        </figure>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -214,7 +191,7 @@
 
         <itemizedlist>
           <listitem>
-            <para>Select the <literal>Device.</literal></para>
+            <para>Select the <literal>Device</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
 
           <listitem>
@@ -224,7 +201,7 @@
           <listitem>
             <para>Choose the <literal>Instances</literal> option, select the
             VNF configuration you desire and press
-            <literal>Add.</literal></para>
+            <literal>Add</literal>.</para>
           </listitem>
 
           <listitem>
@@ -234,7 +211,7 @@
         </itemizedlist>
 
         <figure>
-          <title>Instantiate Fortigate VNF</title>
+          <title>Instantiate the FortiGate VNF</title>
 
           <mediaobject>
             <imageobject>
@@ -249,7 +226,7 @@
 
     <para>Once the VNF is instantiated, the setup is complete and ready for
     testing. Connect the test machine to the LAN port. It will receive an IP
-    address from the Fortigate VNF and be able to access the internet.</para>
+    address from the FortiGate VNF and be able to access the internet.</para>
   </section>
 
   <section id="test_fortvnf_inband">
@@ -261,7 +238,7 @@
       <mediaobject>
         <imageobject>
           <imagedata align="center" fileref="images/uc_ibm_solution_test.png"
-                     scale="50" />
+                     scale="52" />
         </imageobject>
       </mediaobject>
     </figure>
@@ -271,11 +248,11 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
-        <para>Device management traffic from uCPE Manager.</para>
+        <para>Device management traffic from the uCPE Manager.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Fortigate management interface traffic from a web
+        <para>FortiGate management interface traffic from a web
         browser.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -284,13 +261,13 @@
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
-    <para>Having access from the uCPE Manager to the device as shown above,
-    demonstrates that device management traffic passes through the in-band
+    <para>If you have access from the uCPE Manager to the device as shown above, this 
+      demonstrates that device management traffic passes through the In-band
     management WAN bridge successfully.</para>
 
     <para>To access the management interface of the VNF, connect from a web
     browser to the public IP address of the device e.g.
     <literal>https://&lt;IP&gt;</literal>. From a Test machine connected on
-    LAN port, try a test ping to the internet e.g. "ping 8.8.8.8".</para>
+    the LAN port, try a test ping to the internet e.g. "ping 8.8.8.8".</para>
   </section>
-</chapter>
\ No newline at end of file
+</chapter>