6 files changed, 39 insertions, 54 deletions

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/about_release.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
index 01679f8..4d87bbf 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/about_release.xml
@@ -46,7 +46,8 @@
           </row>
 
           <row>
-            <entry>Pre-built binaries (kernel image, dtb &amp; rootfs)</entry>
+            <entry>Pre-built binaries (kernel image, dtb &amp;
+            rootfs).</entry>
           </row>
 
           <row>
@@ -149,12 +150,11 @@
               <entry>Packages in Enea Linux</entry>
 
               <entry><para>See the <olink
-              targetdoc="book_enea_linux_open_source"
-              targetptr="book_enea_linux_open_source"><trademark
+              targetdoc="book_enea_linux_open_source_networking"
+              targetptr="book_enea_linux_open_source_networking"><trademark
               class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Open Source
               Report</olink></para></entry>
             </row>
-
           </tbody>
         </tgroup>
       </informaltable></para>
@@ -164,12 +164,9 @@
     <title>Provided Toolchain/s (SDK)</title>
 
     <para>The SDK contains toolchains supporting cross-compilation of
-    applications for the targets on an x86_64 host. See the <olink
-    targetdoc="book_enea_linux_app_dev_guide"
-    targetptr="book_enea_linux_app_dev_guide"><trademark
-    class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Application Development
-    Guide</olink> for information on how to build and install a
-    toolchain.</para>
+    applications for the targets on an x86_64 host. See the <trademark
+    class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Application Development Guide
+    for information on how to build and install a toolchain.</para>
   </section>
 
   <section id="relinfo-documentation">
@@ -184,17 +181,13 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para><olink targetdoc="book_enea_linux_platforms_dev_guide"
-        targetptr="book_enea_linux_platforms_dev_guide"><trademark
-        class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Platforms Development
-        Guide</olink></para>
+        <para><trademark class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Platforms
+        Development Guide</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para><olink targetdoc="book_enea_linux_app_dev_guide"
-        targetptr="book_enea_linux_app_dev_guide"><trademark
-        class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Application Development
-        Guide</olink></para>
+        <para><trademark class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Application
+        Development Guide</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -203,27 +196,20 @@
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para><olink targetdoc="book_enea_linux_open_source"
-        targetptr="book_enea_linux_open_source"><trademark
+        <para><olink targetdoc="book_enea_linux_open_source_networking"
+        targetptr="book_enea_linux_open_source_networking"><trademark
         class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Open Source
         Report</olink></para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para><olink targetdoc="book_enea_linux_eclipse_open_source"
-        targetptr="book_enea_linux_eclipse_open_source"><trademark
-        class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Eclipse Open Source
-        Report</olink></para>
-      </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
         <para><trademark class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Test
         Report</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
         <para><trademark class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux Real-Time
-        Guide can be read at <ulink
+        Guide, which can be read at <ulink
         url="http://linuxrealtime.org">http://linuxrealtime.org</ulink>.</para>
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
@@ -232,11 +218,11 @@
   <section condition="hidden" id="relinfo-provided-other">
     <title>Other Provided Functionality</title>
 
-    <para>The functionality in a distribution depends on included packages in
-    the default image. In addition to the supported features, the following
-    functionality is also available, among other:<remark>INFO: This section
-    might be hidden by setting condition hidden on the section, MANUALLY in
-    this file.</remark></para>
+    <para>The functionality in a distribution depends on the included packages
+    in the default image. In addition to the supported features, the following
+    functionality is also available:<remark>INFO: This section might be hidden
+    by setting condition hidden on the section, MANUALLY in this
+    file.</remark></para>
 
     <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
       <listitem>
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/eltf_params_updated.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/eltf_params_updated.xml
index 6e851db..72c1592 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/eltf_params_updated.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/eltf_params_updated.xml
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ repo sync</programlisting></para>
   <section id="eltf-target-tables-section">
     <title>Supported Targets with Parameters</title>
 
-    <para>The tables below describes the target(s) supported in this Enea
+    <para>The table(s) below describe the target(s) supported in this Enea
     Linux release.</para>
 
     <section id="eltf-target-table-p2041rdb">
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
index 660b240..3aecc2e 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
 
   <para>Enea Linux is available as both pre-built binary images and source
   code. Both serve a specific purpose and each have their advantages. However,
-  using the pre-built binary images allows for getting up and running faster.
+  using the pre-built binary images allows for getting up-and-running faster.
   Please refer to the sections below for details on how to get Enea Linux as
   pre-built binary images or source code.</para>
 
@@ -56,6 +56,13 @@
 
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem>
+        <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux Release Info</emphasis> -
+        provides information about the current released distribution for a
+        selected set of targets, along with installation requirements and
+        procedures.</para>
+      </listitem>
+
+      <listitem>
         <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux Platform Developer&rsquo;s
         Guide</emphasis> -intended for Enea Linux platform developers, who
         want to configure and build customized Linux kernel images for
@@ -83,19 +90,12 @@
         packages provided with this release of Enea Linux.</para>
       </listitem>
 
-      <listitem>
+      <listitem condition="hidden">
         <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux Eclipse Open Source
         Report</emphasis> - contains the open source and license information
         pertaining to the Eclipse package provided with this release of Enea
         Linux.</para>
       </listitem>
-
-      <listitem>
-        <para><emphasis role="bold">Enea Linux Release Info</emphasis> -
-        provides information about the current released distribution for a
-        selected set of targets, along with installation requirements and
-        procedures.</para>
-      </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
   </section>
 
@@ -166,7 +166,7 @@ id_rsa.pub</programlisting>
 
         <listitem>
           <para>Define the MACHINE from one of the targets listed
-          here,<remark>Below is the "machine_list" programlisting in
+          here:<remark>Below is the "machine_list" programlisting in
           machine_list_generated.xml created by the make system by extracting
           from the manifest</remark></para>
 
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
index 173046b..1aa9580 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
 
     <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
       <listitem>
-        <para>Building the kernel might fail if GNU Make of version 3.82 has
+        <para>Building the kernel might fail if the GNU Make version 3.82 has
         been installed on the host. The mandatory recovery action is to revert
         to version 3.81.<remark>INFO It is possible to hide this entire
         subsection by setting condition hidden on the section
@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@
     <para>Installation of some packages might currently fail when installing
     using the Smart Package Manager. An example is the qemu package. Errors
     can e.g. be reported by smart about conflicts with files from other
-    packages.<remark>INFO It is possible to hide this setting condition hidden
+    packages.<remark>INFO It is possible to hide this, set condition to hidden
     on the section element</remark></para>
 
     <para>The recommended solution to this problem is to install the failing
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
       <title>Example with Failing QEMU Package</title>
 
       <para>As an example, the qemu installation can show the following
-      error.<remark>INFO It is possible to hide this setting condition hidden
+      error.<remark>INFO It is possible to hide this, set condition to hidden
       on the section element</remark></para>
 
       <note>
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
       rpm</command>, then download the above package from
       &lt;build_dir&gt;/tmp/deploy/rpm/aarch64. On target, use <command>rpm -i
       qemu-2.1.0+git0+541bbb07eb-r0.0.aarch64.rpm</command>. If not installed,
-      several dependencies can be seen, e.g.:</para>
+      several needed dependencies can be seen, e.g.:</para>
 
       <programlisting>error: Failed dependencies:
         libpixman-1-0 &gt;= 0.32.6 is needed by qemu-2.1.0+git0+541bbb07eb-r0.0.aarch64
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
index 115acb5..15b7923 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
@@ -16,8 +16,7 @@
 
     <itemizedlist spacing="compact">
       <listitem>
-        <para>New Yocto version (<xi:include
-        href="eltf_params_updated.xml"
+        <para>New Yocto version (<xi:include href="eltf_params_updated.xml"
         xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
         xpointer="element(Yocto_VER/1)" />). See <ulink
         url="https://www.yoctoproject.org/downloads/core/krogoth21">https://www.yoctoproject.org/downloads/core/krogoth21</ulink>.</para>
@@ -30,8 +29,8 @@
     </itemizedlist>
 
     <para>For details, see the Git logs for the repositories specified in the
-    manifest files. See <xref linkend="relinfo-getting-source" /> for more inf
-    on repos and the manifest.</para>
+    manifest files. See <xref linkend="relinfo-getting-source" /> for more
+    information on repos and the manifest.</para>
   </section>
 
   <section condition="hidden" id="relinfo-fixed">
@@ -50,4 +49,4 @@
   <xi:include href="pkgdiff_generated.xml"
               xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
   -->
-</chapter>
+</chapter>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/prerequisites.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/prerequisites.xml
index 9c5aa95..6aa917a 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/prerequisites.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/prerequisites.xml
@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 <chapter id="prerequisites">
   <title>Prerequisites</title>
 
-  <para>Building Enea Linux or compiling applications requires that your git
+  <para>Building Enea Linux or compiling applications requires your git
   environment be setup properly and for certain packages to be installed on
   your Linux development host.</para>