From 4c6c816da370f0560d10c1af1af8112044fffd2b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Scott Rifenbark Date: Mon, 12 Mar 2018 11:35:00 -0700 Subject: getting-started: Review updates for minor wordings and links (From yocto-docs rev: 51dc5dd5362a8e6d6d558a566554bec34764227f) Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie --- .../getting-started-development-environment.xml | 2 +- .../getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml | 29 ++++++++++++---------- 2 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-) (limited to 'documentation') diff --git a/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-development-environment.xml b/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-development-environment.xml index 9bbd8e062f..7bcf87ffd9 100644 --- a/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-development-environment.xml +++ b/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-development-environment.xml @@ -37,7 +37,7 @@ Open source projects conceptually have differing concurrent agendas, approaches, and production. These facets of the development process can come from anyone in the - public (community) that has a stake in the software project. + public (community) who has a stake in the software project. The open source environment contains new copyright, licensing, domain, and consumer issues that differ from the more traditional development environment. diff --git a/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml b/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml index f39cd70c74..6941db68b9 100644 --- a/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml +++ b/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml @@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ Binary Reproducibility: - The Yocto Project you to be very specific about + The Yocto Project allows you to be very specific about dependencies and achieves very high percentages of binary reproducibility (e.g. 99.8% for core-image-minimal). @@ -186,7 +186,7 @@ License Manifest: The Yocto Project provides a license manifest for - review by people that need to track the use of open + review by people who need to track the use of open source licenses (e.g.legal teams). @@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ Project Workflow Could Be Confusing: The Yocto Project workflow could be confusing if you - used to traditional desktop and server software + are used to traditional desktop and server software development. In a desktop development environment, mechanisms exist to easily pull and install new packages, which are @@ -546,7 +546,7 @@ The main purpose of the system is to help you manage the recipes you maintain and to offer a dynamic overview of the project. - The Recipe Reporting System tracks is built on top + The Recipe Reporting System is built on top the of OpenEmbedded Metadata Index, which is a website that indexes layers for the OpenEmbedded build system. @@ -883,8 +883,10 @@ familiar shell of a supported Linux distribution. For information on how to set up a Build Host on - a system running Linux as its native operating system, see - TBD. + a system running Linux as its native operating system, + see the + "Setting Up a Native Linux Host" + section in the Yocto Project Development Tasks Manual. CROss PlatformS (CROPS): @@ -909,7 +911,9 @@ on a system natively running Linux. For information on how to set up a Build Host with - CROPS, see TBD. + CROPS, see the + "Setting Up to Use CROss PlatformS (CROPS)" + section in the Yocto Project Development Tasks Manual. Toaster: @@ -969,12 +973,12 @@ Poky is a combined repository of BitBake, OpenEmbedded-Core - (found in meta), + (which is found in meta), meta-poky, meta-yocto-bsp, and documentation provided all together and known to work well together. - You can view the Poky repository as part of the - Source Repositories. + You can view these items that make up the Poky repository in the + Source Repositories. If you are interested in all the contents of the poky Git repository, see the @@ -1250,7 +1254,7 @@ developed by the OpenEmbedded community that has been pared down into a smaller, core set of continuously validated recipes. - The result is a tightly controlled and an quality-assured + The result is a tightly controlled and quality-assured core set of recipes. You can see the Metadata in the @@ -1285,8 +1289,7 @@ Poky: - Poky, which is pronounced Pock-ee, - is a reference embedded distribution and a reference + Poky is a reference embedded distribution and a reference test configuration. Poky provides the following: -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf