From a246c304de5352ffee4a92453768d4778a0f8ed0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Date: Thu, 28 Jul 2011 05:57:17 -0700
Subject: documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml: Minor edits.

(From yocto-docs rev: 64525f6a751d23d2d8ae1d799b4f661e986b5e83)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml | 10 ++++------
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation/dev-manual')

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
index 30859d793e..baf99dd90c 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
@@ -42,7 +42,7 @@
         <title>Developing a Board Support Package (BSP)</title>
 
         <para>
-            A BSP is a package of recipes that when applied while building an image results in 
+            A BSP is a package of recipes that when applied during a build results in 
             an image you can run on a particular board.  
             Thus, the package, when compiled into the new image, supports the operation of the board.  
         </para>
@@ -55,21 +55,19 @@
         <para>
             The remainder of this section presents the basic steps to create a BSP basing it on an 
             existing BSP that ships with the Yocto Project.
-            You can reference <xref linkend='dev-manual-bsp-appendix'>BSP Development Case</xref>
+            You can reference <xref linkend='dev-manual-bsp-appendix'>BSP Development Example</xref>
             for a detailed example that uses the Crown Bay BSP as a base BSP from which to start.
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            The following illustration shows the general workflow to create a BSP.
-            In the figure....
+            This illustration and the following list summarizes the BSP creation general workflow.
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            <imagedata fileref="figures/bsp-dev-flow.png" width="6in" depth="7in" align="center" scale="100" />
+            <imagedata fileref="figures/bsp-dev-flow.png" width="6in" depth="7in" align="left" scale="100" />
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            Here are the basic steps involved in creating a BSP:
             <orderedlist>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>Set up your host development system to support 
                     development using the Yocto Project</emphasis>:  See  
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