1 files changed, 40 insertions, 27 deletions
diff --git a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
index b4b3f4bd0e..063b55c47d 100644
--- a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
+++ b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
@@ -16,35 +16,48 @@
                Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document under
                the terms of the <ulink type="http" url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0/uk/">Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 UK: England &amp; Wales</ulink> as published by Creative Commons.
            </para>
-            <note><title>Manual Notes</title>
+           <note><title>Manual Notes</title>
-                <itemizedlist>
+               <itemizedlist>
-                    <listitem><para>
+                   <listitem><para>
-                        For the latest version of the Yocto Project Quick
+                       This version of the
-                        Start associated with this Yocto Project release
+                       <emphasis>Yocto Project Quick Start</emphasis>
-                        (version &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION;),
+                       is for the &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION; release of the
-                        see the Yocto Project Quick Start from the
+                       Yocto Project.
-                        <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>.
+                       To be sure you have the latest version of the manual
-                        </para></listitem>
+                       for this release, go to the
-                    <listitem><para>
+                       <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>
-                        This version of the manual is version
+                       and select the manual from that site.
-                        &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION;.
+                       Manuals from the site are more up-to-date than manuals
-                        For later releases of the Yocto Project (if they exist),
+                       derived from the Yocto Project released TAR files.
-                        go to the
+                       </para></listitem>
-                        <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>
+                   <listitem><para>
-                        and use the drop-down "Active Releases" button
+                       If you located this manual through a web search, the
-                        and choose the Yocto Project version for which you want
+                       version of the manual might not be the one you want
-                        the manual.
+                       (e.g. the search might have returned a manual much
-                        </para></listitem>
+                       older than the Yocto Project version with which you
-                    <listitem><para>
+                       are working).
-                        For an in-development version of the Yocto Project
+                       You can see all Yocto Project major releases by
-                        Quick Start, see
+                       visiting the
-                        <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_URL;/latest/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.html'></ulink>.
+                       <ulink url='&YOCTO_WIKI_URL;/wiki/Releases'>Releases</ulink>
-                        </para></listitem>
+                       page.
-                </itemizedlist>
+                       If you need a version of this manual for a different
-            </note>
+                       Yocto Project release, visit the
+                       <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>
+                       and select the manual set by using the
+                       "ACTIVE RELEASES DOCUMENTATION" or "DOCUMENTS ARCHIVE"
+                       pull-down menus.
+                       </para></listitem>
+                   <listitem><para>
+                       To report any inaccuracies or problems with this
+                       manual, send an email to the Yocto Project
+                       discussion group at
+                       <filename>yocto@yoctoproject.com</filename> or log into
+                       the freenode <filename>#yocto</filename> channel.
+                       </para></listitem>
+               </itemizedlist>
+           </note>
        </legalnotice>
        <abstract>
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diff --git a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml index b4b3f4bd0e..063b55c47d 100644 --- a/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml +++ b/documentation/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.xml
@@ -16,35 +16,48 @@
16	Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document under	16	Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this document under
17	the terms of the <ulink type="http" url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0/uk/">Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 UK: England & Wales</ulink> as published by Creative Commons.	17	the terms of the <ulink type="http" url="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/2.0/uk/">Creative Commons Attribution-Share Alike 2.0 UK: England & Wales</ulink> as published by Creative Commons.
18	</para>	18	</para>
19	<note><title>Manual Notes</title>	19	<note><title>Manual Notes</title>
20	<itemizedlist>	20	<itemizedlist>
21	<listitem><para>	21	<listitem><para>
22	For the latest version of the Yocto Project Quick	22	This version of the
23	Start associated with this Yocto Project release	23	<emphasis>Yocto Project Quick Start</emphasis>
24	(version &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION;),	24	is for the &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION; release of the
25	see the Yocto Project Quick Start from the	25	Yocto Project.
26	<ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>.	26	To be sure you have the latest version of the manual
27	</para></listitem>	27	for this release, go to the
28	<listitem><para>	28	<ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>
29	This version of the manual is version	29	and select the manual from that site.
30	&YOCTO_DOC_VERSION;.	30	Manuals from the site are more up-to-date than manuals
31	For later releases of the Yocto Project (if they exist),	31	derived from the Yocto Project released TAR files.
32	go to the	32	</para></listitem>
33	<ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>	33	<listitem><para>
34	and use the drop-down "Active Releases" button	34	If you located this manual through a web search, the
35	and choose the Yocto Project version for which you want	35	version of the manual might not be the one you want
36	the manual.	36	(e.g. the search might have returned a manual much
37	</para></listitem>	37	older than the Yocto Project version with which you
38	<listitem><para>	38	are working).
39	For an in-development version of the Yocto Project	39	You can see all Yocto Project major releases by
40	Quick Start, see	40	visiting the
41	<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_URL;/latest/yocto-project-qs/yocto-project-qs.html'></ulink>.	41	<ulink url='&YOCTO_WIKI_URL;/wiki/Releases'>Releases</ulink>
42	</para></listitem>	42	page.
43	</itemizedlist>	43	If you need a version of this manual for a different
44	</note>	44	Yocto Project release, visit the
		45	<ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>
		46	and select the manual set by using the
		47	"ACTIVE RELEASES DOCUMENTATION" or "DOCUMENTS ARCHIVE"
		48	pull-down menus.
		49	</para></listitem>
		50	<listitem><para>
		51	To report any inaccuracies or problems with this
		52	manual, send an email to the Yocto Project
		53	discussion group at
		54	<filename>yocto@yoctoproject.com</filename> or log into
		55	the freenode <filename>#yocto</filename> channel.
		56	</para></listitem>
		57	</itemizedlist>
		58	</note>
45	</legalnotice>	59	</legalnotice>
46		60
47
48	<abstract>	61	<abstract>
49	<imagedata fileref="figures/yocto-project-transp.png"	62	<imagedata fileref="figures/yocto-project-transp.png"
50	width="6in" depth="1in"	63	width="6in" depth="1in"