3 files changed, 6 insertions, 25 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml
index 3c0ab28d2b..44ffe31260 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-bsp-appendix.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 
 <appendix id='dev-manual-bsp-appendix'>
 
-<title>BSP Development Case</title>
+<title>BSP Development Example</title>
 
 <para>
     This appendix provides a complete BSP example.
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-kernel-appendix.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-kernel-appendix.xml
index 608fc32b9a..c5fd3e3641 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-kernel-appendix.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-kernel-appendix.xml
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
 
 <appendix id='dev-manual-kernel-appendix'>
 
-<title>Kernel Modification Case</title>
+<title>Kernel Modification Example</title>
 
         <para>
             Kernel modification involves changing or adding configurations to an existing kernel, or 
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
index 6b60b4c426..b07fe500a8 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
@@ -6,20 +6,6 @@
 <title>Common Development Models</title>
 
 <para>
-    [WRITERS NOTE: This chapter presents common development models within the Yocto Project.
-    Reading this chapter will give the user a feel for the overall development process.  
-    The chapter will follow the framework for the manual.  
-    The team decided to present a single development model and not to try and represent all the 
-    various possibilities that might exist.  
-    The chapter will include an over-arching diagram that shows a simple, most-common development model.  
-    The diagram will consist of boxes that represent high-level areas of the development process.  
-    For example, a box for “Setting Up” will be in the model.  
-    A box for “Debugging” will exist.  
-    The diagram needs to account for the two use-cases we are going to showcase 
-    (system development and application development)].
-</para>
-
-<para>
     Many development models exist for which you can use the Yocto Project. 
     However, for the purposes of this manual we are going to focus on two common ones:  
     System Development and User Application Development.  
@@ -29,15 +15,10 @@
 </para>
 
 <para>
-    This chapter presents an overview of the primary models.
-    Supsequent appendices in the manual provide detailed explanations of the examples.
-</para>
-
-<para>
-    [WRITERS NOTE:  What is undetermined at this point is how much of the entire development process 
-    we include in this particular chapter.  
-    In other words, do we cover debugging and emulation steps here on a case-specific basis?  
-    Or, do we capture that information in the appropriate subsequent chapter by case?]
+    This chapter presents overviews of both system and application models.
+    If you want to reference specific examples of these development models, 
+    see <xref linkend='dev-manual-bsp-appendix'>BSP Development Example</xref> and 
+    <xref linkend='dev-manual-kernel-appendix'>Kernel Modification Example</xref>.
 </para>
 
 <section id='system-development-model'>