sdk-manual: Applied review edits to the manual.

(From yocto-docs rev: be853fb74b28bcf1b27b3b7a8e83012928d4e53a)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 13 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml b/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml
index c752656ce4..10089ca3ae 100644
--- a/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml
+++ b/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml
@@ -24,18 +24,10 @@
     <title>Why use the Standard SDK and What is in It?</title>
 
     <para>
-        Fundamentally, the standard SDK exists so that you can access
-        cross-development tools.
-        This paragraph describes why you use the Standard SDK.
-        Probably need to compare that against why you would not be interested
-        in the extensible SDK here as well.
-        According to Paul, the most interest lies in the extensible SDK.
-        So providing this comparison would be helpful.
-        Currently, my understanding boils down to this: The only reason to use
-        the Standard SDK is if you want to build and debug source code that
-        you have.
-        That pretty much sums it up.
-        If there is more detail, I need to know about it.
+        The Standard SDK provides a cross-development toolchain and libraries
+        tailored to the contents of a specific image.
+        You would use the Standard SDK if you want a more traditional toolchain
+        experience.
     </para>
 
     <para>
@@ -125,6 +117,10 @@
         <note>
             You must change the permissions on the toolchain
             installer script so that it is executable.
+            Here is an example:
+            <literallayout class='monospaced'>
+     $ chmod +x  poky-glibc-x86_64-core-image-sato-i586-toolchain-2.1.sh
+            </literallayout>
         </note>
     </para>
 
@@ -440,7 +436,7 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id='sdk-developing-applications-using-eclipse'>
-    <title>Devloping Applications Using <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark></title>
+    <title>Developing Applications Using <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark></title>
 
     <para>
         If you are familiar with the popular Eclipse IDE, you can use an