documentation/dev-manual: Edits from Tom Zanussi.

Tom Zanussi provided a review up through part of the "model"
chapter.  I have implemented his comments mosty verbatim.

Reported-by: Tom Zanussi
(From yocto-docs rev: 693d4fadd4b34ffef9953fb1850d381ff7c028a3)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
index f2912b1c1b..296c59bcde 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
 
         <para>
             A BSP is a package of recipes that, when applied, during a build results in 
-            an image you can run on a particular board.  
+            an image that you can run on a particular board.  
             Thus, the package, when compiled into the new image, supports the operation of the board.  
         </para>
 
@@ -61,8 +61,8 @@
         </note>
 
         <para>
-            The remainder of this section presents the basic steps to create a BSP basing it on an 
-            existing BSP that ships with the Yocto Project.
+            The remainder of this section presents the basic steps used to create a BSP 
+            based on an existing BSP that ships with the Yocto Project.
             You can reference the "<link linkend='dev-manual-bsp-appendix'>BSP Development Example</link>"
             appendix for a detailed example that uses the Crown Bay BSP as a base BSP from which to start.
         </para>
@@ -85,12 +85,12 @@
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>Establish a local copy of the Yocto Project files on your 
                     system</emphasis>:  You need to have the Yocto Project files available on your host system. 
                     Having the Yocto Project files on your system gives you access to the build
-                    process and tools you need.
+                    process and to the tools you need.
                     For information on how to get these files, see the
                     "<link linkend='getting-setup'>Getting Setup</link>" section.</para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>Establish a local copy of the base BSP files</emphasis>:  Having    
                     the BSP files on your system gives you access to the build
-                    process and tools you need for creating a BSP.
+                    process and to the tools you need for creating a BSP.
                     For information on how to get these files, see the
                     "<link linkend='getting-setup'>Getting Setup</link>" section.</para></listitem>    
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>Choose a Yocto Project-supported BSP as your base BSP</emphasis>: