documentation/dev-manual: Edits from Tom Zanussi.

Tom Zanussi provided a review up through part of the "model"
chapter.  I have implemented his comments mosty verbatim.

Reported-by: Tom Zanussi
(From yocto-docs rev: 693d4fadd4b34ffef9953fb1850d381ff7c028a3)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
index 85eea519ff..da6abd4b08 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@
             <itemizedlist>
                 <listitem><para>Information that lets you get set 
                     up to develop using the Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para>Information to help developers that are new to the open source environment 
+                <listitem><para>Information to help developers who are new to the open source environment 
                     and to the distributed revision control system Git, which the Yocto Project 
                     uses.</para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>An understanding of common end-to-end development models.</para></listitem>
@@ -63,7 +63,7 @@
             <itemizedlist>
                 <listitem><para>Step-by-step instructions if those instructions exist in other Yocto 
                     Project documentation.  
-                    For example, The Application Development Toolkit (ADT) User’s Guide contains detailed 
+                    For example, the Application Development Toolkit (ADT) User’s Guide contains detailed 
                     instruction on how to obtain and configure the 
                     <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark> Yocto Plug-in.</para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>Reference material.  
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@
                     OpenedHand has since been acquired by Intel Corporation.</para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>
                     <ulink url='http://www.intel.com/'>Intel Corporation</ulink>:</emphasis>
-                    The company who acquired OpenedHand in 2008 and continues development on the 
+                    The company that acquired OpenedHand in 2008 and continues development on the 
                     Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>
                     <ulink url='http://www.openembedded.org/'>OpenEmbedded</ulink>:</emphasis>