From 7d208c1c77dbf079b66a28076174a08951b27549 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 14 Sep 2016 06:01:15 -0700
Subject: ref-manual: Applied review edits to auto added runtime deps

Fixes [YOCTO #10248]

Applied some review changes.  Minor wording tweaks and typo
fixes.

(From yocto-docs rev: a9e99c8b44c48c74448487187cebfe8df331e9e1)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/ref-manual/ref-variables.xml     | 11 +++++------
 documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml | 20 +++++++++++---------
 2 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 15 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation')

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/ref-variables.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/ref-variables.xml
index a10a0dca75..a97369dfad 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/ref-variables.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/ref-variables.xml
@@ -10493,10 +10493,9 @@ recipes-graphics/xorg-font/font-alias_1.0.3.bb:PR = "${INC_PR}.3"
                     the
                     <link linkend='ref-tasks-package_write_deb'><filename>do_package_write_*</filename></link>
                     tasks.
-                    Exactly how this is done depends on the package format used
-                    as described in the
-                    <link linkend='var-PACKAGE_CLASSES'><filename>PACKAGE_CLASSES</filename></link>
-                    variable.
+                    Exactly how this is done depends on which package format
+                    is used, which is determined by
+                    <link linkend='var-PACKAGE_CLASSES'><filename>PACKAGE_CLASSES</filename></link>.
                     When the corresponding package manager installs the
                     package, it will know to also install the packages on
                     which it depends.
@@ -10509,9 +10508,9 @@ recipes-graphics/xorg-font/font-alias_1.0.3.bb:PR = "${INC_PR}.3"
                     dependency to be added.
                     This dependency is from the recipe's
                     <link linkend='ref-tasks-build'><filename>do_build</filename></link>
-                    (not to be confused with the
+                    (not to be confused with
                     <link linkend='ref-tasks-compile'><filename>do_compile</filename></link>)
-                    task to the to the <filename>do_package_write_*</filename>
+                    task to the <filename>do_package_write_*</filename>
                     task of the recipes that build <filename>bar</filename> and
                     <filename>baz</filename>.
                 </para>
diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
index e5c8eb83b6..558af87d91 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
@@ -1022,15 +1022,17 @@
                 the package that depends on the shared library to the package
                 that contains the library.</para>
 
-                <para>If the library being linked against is versioned
-                (i.e. includes a version number), then the automatically added
-                runtime dependency will specify at least that version, as if
+                <para>The automatically added runtime dependency also includes
+                a version restriction.
+                This version restriction specifies that at least the current
+                version of the package that provides the shared library must be
+                used, as if
                 "<replaceable>package</replaceable> (>= <replaceable>version</replaceable>)"
                 had been added to
                 <link linkend='var-RDEPENDS'><filename>RDEPENDS</filename></link>.
-                This dependency forces an upgrade of the package that provides
-                the shared library when installing the package that depends on
-                the library, if needed.</para>
+                This forces an upgrade of the package containing the shared
+                library when installing the package that depends on the
+                library, if needed.</para>
 
                 <para>If you want to avoid a package being registered as
                 providing a particular shared library (e.g. because the library
@@ -1054,8 +1056,8 @@
                 task.</para>
 
                 <para>Simultaneously, all pkg-config modules installed by the
-                recipe are inspected to see what other modules on which the
-                pkg-config modules depend.
+                recipe are inspected to see what other pkg-config modules they
+                depend on.
                 A module is seen as depending on another module if it contains
                 a "Requires:" line that specifies the other module.
                 For each module dependency,
@@ -1078,7 +1080,7 @@
         task of each recipe in
         <link linkend='var-DEPENDS'><filename>DEPENDS</filename></link>
         through use of a
-        <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_BB_URL;#variable-flags'><filename>[vardeps]</filename></ulink>
+        <filename>[</filename><ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_BB_URL;#variable-flags'><filename>deptask</filename></ulink><filename>]</filename>
         declaration, which guarantees that the required
         shared-library/module-to-package mapping information will be available
         when needed as long as <filename>DEPENDS</filename> has been
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