From 54050ffceb96b8ad8c089f6612e094a367a4edc8 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 22 Mar 2016 09:49:33 -0700
Subject: sdk-manual: Applied 2nd round of review edits.

(From yocto-docs rev: 046b8ed69e0c6403f455e2ec8a0ccc30aea894de)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-appendix-customizing.xml |  8 ++++----
 documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-extensible.xml           |  8 ++------
 documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml                | 19 ++++---------------
 3 files changed, 10 insertions(+), 25 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation')

diff --git a/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-appendix-customizing.xml b/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-appendix-customizing.xml
index 7a438725b6..d38320f8bb 100644
--- a/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-appendix-customizing.xml
+++ b/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-appendix-customizing.xml
@@ -18,10 +18,10 @@
     <para>
         The extensible SDK primarily consists of a pre-configured copy of
         the OpenEmbedded build system from which it was produced.
-        Thus, the SDK's configuration is derived using that build system.
-        However, filters such as the following exist that the OpenEmbedded
-        build system applies to <filename>local.conf</filename> and
-        <filename>auto.conf</filename> when these files are present:
+        Thus, the SDK's configuration is derived using that build system and
+        the following filters, which the OpenEmbedded build system applies
+        against <filename>local.conf</filename> and
+        <filename>auto.conf</filename> if they are present:
         <itemizedlist>
             <listitem><para>
                 Variables whose values start with "/" are excluded since the
diff --git a/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-extensible.xml b/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-extensible.xml
index 58d2aec977..e43c98ecee 100644
--- a/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-extensible.xml
+++ b/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-extensible.xml
@@ -54,8 +54,8 @@
                 The extensible SDK installer performs additional tasks as
                 compared to the standard SDK installer.
                 The extensible SDK installer extracts build tools specific
-                to the SDK and the installer also prepares the OpenEmbedded
-                build system.
+                to the SDK and the installer also prepares the internal build
+                system within the SDK.
                 Here is example output for running the extensible SDK
                 installer:
                 <literallayout class='monospaced'>
@@ -255,10 +255,6 @@
                     <para>If you need to take the build output and eventually
                     move it to the target hardware, you would use
                     <filename>devtool build</filename>:
-                    <note>
-                        You could use <filename>bitbake</filename> to build
-                        the recipe as well.
-                    </note>
                     <literallayout class='monospaced'>
      $ devtool build <replaceable>recipe</replaceable>
                     </literallayout></para>
diff --git a/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml b/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml
index 10089ca3ae..6ddcb45fcf 100644
--- a/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml
+++ b/documentation/sdk-manual/sdk-using.xml
@@ -38,12 +38,6 @@
         You can see the directory structure in the
         "<link linkend='sdk-installed-standard-sdk-directory-structure'>Installed Standard SDK Directory Structure</link>"
         section.
-        <note>
-            You can also find information on how the Yocto Project
-            OpenEmbedded build system creates an SDK image by looking at the
-            "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;#sdk-generation-dev-environment'>SDK Generation</ulink>"
-            section in the Yocto Project Reference Manual.
-        </note>
     </para>
 </section>
 
@@ -84,12 +78,7 @@
 
                     i686 or x86_64.
 
-         <replaceable>image_type</replaceable> is a string representing the image you wish to
-                develop a SDK for use against. The Yocto Project builds
-                installers for standard SDKs using the following BitBake
-                command:
-
-                    bitbake core-image-sato -c populate_sdk
+         <replaceable>image_type</replaceable> is the image for which the SDK was built.
 
          <replaceable>arch</replaceable> is a string representing the tuned target architecture:
 
@@ -116,11 +105,11 @@
         installation directory.
         <note>
             You must change the permissions on the toolchain
-            installer script so that it is executable.
-            Here is an example:
+            installer script so that it is executable:
             <literallayout class='monospaced'>
-     $ chmod +x  poky-glibc-x86_64-core-image-sato-i586-toolchain-2.1.sh
+     $ chmod +x poky-glibc-x86_64-core-image-sato-i586-toolchain-2.1.sh
             </literallayout>
+            This example makes the installation script executable.
         </note>
     </para>
 
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