From 3be4af9cf3a517183aafd8db1ab4b568679baa93 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Date: Thu, 31 Jul 2014 09:23:00 +0300
Subject: dev-manual: Applied review edits to the 'wic' section.

I made some small edits to the section based on Tom Zanussi's
review.

(From yocto-docs rev: 560ea7b0eb131e59b190a34cadbe77729e76d61c)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml | 17 +++++++++--------
 1 file changed, 9 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation')

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
index 01ee2da8d0..d235a99f91 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-common-tasks.xml
@@ -3560,12 +3560,12 @@
                         have already created an image using the
                         Openembedded build system (e.g.
                         <filename>core-image-minimal</filename>).
-                        It might seem redundant to generate an image in
+                        While it might seem redundant to generate an image in
                         order to create an image using
-                        <filename>wic</filename>, but in the current
-                        version <filename>wic</filename>, the artifacts
-                        are needed in the form generated by the build
-                        system.</para></listitem>
+                        <filename>wic</filename>, the current version of
+                        <filename>wic</filename> requires the artifacts
+                        in the form generated by the build system.
+                        </para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para>
                         You must have sourced one of the build environment
                         setup scripts (i.e.
@@ -4182,7 +4182,8 @@
                 The code that then needs to call the plugin methods uses
                 <filename>plugin.get_source_plugin_methods()</filename>
                 to find the method or methods needed by the call.
-                Location is accomplished by filling up a dict with keys
+                Retrieval of those methods is accomplished is accomplished
+                by filling up a dict with keys
                 containing the method names of interest.
                 On success, these will be filled in with the actual
                 methods.
@@ -4205,7 +4206,7 @@
                 The following is a list of the commands, their syntax,
                 and meanings.
                 The commands are based on the Fedora
-                kickstart documentation but with modifications to
+                kickstart versions but with modifications to
                 reflect <filename>wic</filename> capabilities.
                 You can see the original documentation for those commands
                 at the following links:
@@ -4356,7 +4357,7 @@
                         means of modifying bootloader configuration.
                         </para>
                         <para>
-                        Future updates will implement more options.
+                        Future updates will implement more commands and options.
                         If you use anything that is not specifically
                         supported, results can be unpredictable.</para>
                     </note>
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