From 025386d53ceef681d7e829ad184b6850af55619c Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Michael Opdenacker Date: Fri, 9 Feb 2024 17:48:06 +0100 Subject: manuals: suppress excess use of "following" word To simplify the style, replace "Following is" and "Following are" by "here is" and "here are", sounding more natural. In some cases, also go further by simplifying "Here are/is xxx" by "xxx are/is" when the "are" or "is" are not two far at the end of the sentence. In some cases too, completely remove the sentence, when it's redundant with the preceding title. (From yocto-docs rev: 52ba6bb16c73cbc2c0e77496d5226c49bce786f5) Signed-off-by: Michael Opdenacker CC: Daniel Ammann Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie --- documentation/sdk-manual/appendix-obtain.rst | 10 +++++----- documentation/sdk-manual/intro.rst | 2 +- 2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'documentation/sdk-manual') diff --git a/documentation/sdk-manual/appendix-obtain.rst b/documentation/sdk-manual/appendix-obtain.rst index ad531cbf24..d06d6ec6b5 100644 --- a/documentation/sdk-manual/appendix-obtain.rst +++ b/documentation/sdk-manual/appendix-obtain.rst @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ Follow these steps to locate and hand-install the toolchain: poky-glibc-x86_64-core-image-sato-core2-64-qemux86-64-toolchain-&DISTRO;.sh #. *Run the Installer:* Be sure you have execution privileges and run - the installer. Following is an example from the ``Downloads`` + the installer. Here is an example from the ``Downloads`` directory:: $ ~/Downloads/poky-glibc-x86_64-core-image-sato-core2-64-qemux86-64-toolchain-&DISTRO;.sh @@ -165,12 +165,12 @@ build the SDK installer. Follow these steps: variable inside your ``local.conf`` file before building the SDK installer. Doing so ensures that the eventual SDK installation process installs the appropriate library packages - as part of the SDK. Following is an example using ``libc`` + as part of the SDK. Here is an example using ``libc`` static development libraries: TOOLCHAIN_TARGET_TASK:append = " libc-staticdev" #. *Run the Installer:* You can now run the SDK installer from - ``tmp/deploy/sdk`` in the :term:`Build Directory`. Following is an example:: + ``tmp/deploy/sdk`` in the :term:`Build Directory`. Here is an example:: $ cd poky/build/tmp/deploy/sdk $ ./poky-glibc-x86_64-core-image-sato-core2-64-toolchain-ext-&DISTRO;.sh @@ -235,7 +235,7 @@ Follow these steps to extract the root filesystem: This script is located in the top-level directory in which you installed the toolchain (e.g. ``poky_sdk``). - Following is an example based on the toolchain installed in the + Here is an example based on the toolchain installed in the ":ref:`sdk-manual/appendix-obtain:locating pre-built sdk installers`" section:: $ source poky_sdk/environment-setup-core2-64-poky-linux @@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ Follow these steps to extract the root filesystem: #. *Extract the Root Filesystem:* Use the ``runqemu-extract-sdk`` command and provide the root filesystem image. - Following is an example command that extracts the root filesystem + Here is an example command that extracts the root filesystem from a previously built root filesystem image that was downloaded from the :yocto_dl:`Index of Releases `. This command extracts the root filesystem into the ``core2-64-sato`` diff --git a/documentation/sdk-manual/intro.rst b/documentation/sdk-manual/intro.rst index 49aa921e70..e8fd191dbc 100644 --- a/documentation/sdk-manual/intro.rst +++ b/documentation/sdk-manual/intro.rst @@ -66,7 +66,7 @@ The SDK development environment consists of the following: In summary, the extensible and standard SDK share many features. However, the extensible SDK has powerful development tools to help you -more quickly develop applications. Following is a table that summarizes +more quickly develop applications. Here is a table that summarizes the primary differences between the standard and extensible SDK types when considering which to build: -- cgit v1.2.3-54-g00ecf