From 826d56d743fe15805cc004e10c1ee5b4fc0f69a9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Date: Tue, 26 Mar 2013 12:02:28 -0700
Subject: ref-manual: Active voice applied to "Debugging" section.

(From yocto-docs rev: 891d6b7eed39c457334ed0956d41f4c873392855)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml | 14 +++++++-------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 7 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml')

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
index 07427b4c9c..73d27c40ce 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
@@ -529,22 +529,22 @@
                 <itemizedlist>
                     <listitem><para>Whenever a shared state package is written out, so is a
                         corresponding <filename>.siginfo</filename> file.
-                        This practice results in a pickled python database of all
+                        This practice results in a pickled Python database of all
                         the metadata that went into creating the hash for a given shared state
                         package.</para></listitem>
-                    <listitem><para>If BitBake is run with the <filename>--dump-signatures</filename>
+                    <listitem><para>If you run BitBake with the <filename>--dump-signatures</filename>
                         (or <filename>-S</filename>) option, BitBake dumps out
                         <filename>.siginfo</filename> files in
                         the stamp directory for every task it would have executed instead of
                         building the specified target package.</para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para>There is a <filename>bitbake-diffsigs</filename> command that
-                        can process these <filename>.siginfo</filename> files.
-                        If one file is specified, it will dump out the dependency
+                        can process <filename>.siginfo</filename> files.
+                        If you specify one of these files, BitBake dumps out the dependency
                         information in the file.
-                        If two files are specified, it will compare the two files and dump out
+                        If you specify two files, BitBake compares the two files and dumps out
                         the differences between the two.
-                        This allows the question of "What changed between X and Y?" to be
-                        answered easily.</para></listitem>
+                        This more easily helps answer the question of "What 
+                        changed between X and Y?"</para></listitem>
                 </itemizedlist>
             </para>
         </section>
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