From e4f0cc178e4aa560c2ccfa2013c2cdf288a94486 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Date: Fri, 29 Mar 2013 10:09:12 -0700
Subject: ref-manual: Edits to the "Contributing" chapter.

Some small, general edits.  Added a few links to some terms.
Did a little re-wording in various places.

(From yocto-docs rev: 621c5094789921874461c6618b54e50e00a2d141)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml | 64 ++++++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 38 insertions(+), 26 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml')

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml
index a6916064f6..bc8a9cd000 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/resources.xml
@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@
         A number of places exist to find help if you run into difficulties or find bugs.
         To find out how to download source code,
         see the "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#local-yp-release'>Yocto Project Release</ulink>"
-        list item in the Yocto Project Development Manual.
+        section in the Yocto Project Development Manual.
     </para>
 </section>
 
@@ -29,10 +29,11 @@
     <title>Mailing lists</title>
 
     <para>
-        There are a number of mailing lists maintained by the Yocto Project as well as
-        related OpenEmbedded mailing lists for discussion, patch submission and announcements.
-        To subscribe to one of the following mailing lists, click on the appropriate URL
-        in the following list and follow the instructions:
+        A number of mailing lists maintained by the Yocto Project exist 
+        as well as related OpenEmbedded mailing lists for discussion, 
+        patch submission and announcements.
+        To subscribe to one of the following mailing lists, click on the 
+        appropriate URL in the following list and follow the instructions:
         <itemizedlist>
             <listitem><para><ulink url='&YOCTO_LISTS_URL;/listinfo/yocto'></ulink> -
                 General Yocto Project discussion mailing list. </para></listitem>
@@ -41,9 +42,13 @@
             <listitem><para><ulink url='&OE_LISTS_URL;/listinfo/openembedded-devel'></ulink> -
                 Discussion mailing list about OpenEmbedded.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para><ulink url='&OE_LISTS_URL;/listinfo/bitbake-devel'></ulink> -
-                Discussion mailing list about the BitBake build tool.</para></listitem>
+                Discussion mailing list about the 
+                <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#bitbake-term'>BitBake</ulink>
+                build tool.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para><ulink url='&YOCTO_LISTS_URL;/listinfo/poky'></ulink> -
-                Discussion mailing list about Poky.</para></listitem>
+                Discussion mailing list about 
+                <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#poky'>Poky</ulink>.
+                </para></listitem>
             <listitem><para><ulink url='&YOCTO_LISTS_URL;/listinfo/yocto-announce'></ulink> -
                 Mailing list to receive official Yocto Project release and milestone
                 announcements.</para></listitem>
@@ -67,30 +72,37 @@
     <title>Links</title>
 
     <para>
-        Following is a list of resources you will find helpful:
+        Here is a list of resources you will find helpful:
         <itemizedlist>
-            <listitem><para><emphasis><ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;'>The Yocto Project website</ulink>:
-                </emphasis> The home site for the Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
-<!--            <listitem><para><emphasis><ulink url='&OH_HOME_URL;'>OpenedHand</ulink>:</emphasis>
-                The company where the Yocto Project build system Poky was first developed.
-                OpenedHand has since been acquired by Intel Corporation.</para></listitem> -->
-            <listitem><para><emphasis><ulink url='http://www.intel.com/'>Intel Corporation</ulink>:</emphasis>
-                The company who acquired OpenedHand in 2008 and began development on the
-                Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para><emphasis><ulink url='&OE_HOME_URL;'>OpenEmbedded</ulink>:</emphasis>
-                The upstream, generic, embedded distribution used as the basis for the build system in the
-                Yocto Project.
-                Poky derives from and contributes back to the OpenEmbedded project.</para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para><emphasis><ulink url='http://developer.berlios.de/projects/bitbake/'>
+            <listitem><para><emphasis>
+                <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;'>The Yocto Project website</ulink>:
+                </emphasis> The home site for the Yocto 
+                Project.</para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para><emphasis>
+                <ulink url='http://www.intel.com/'>Intel Corporation</ulink>:</emphasis>
+                The company who acquired OpenedHand in 2008 and began 
+                development on the Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para><emphasis>
+                <ulink url='&OE_HOME_URL;'>OpenEmbedded</ulink>:</emphasis>
+                The upstream, generic, embedded distribution used as the basis 
+                for the build system in the Yocto Project.
+                Poky derives from and contributes back to the OpenEmbedded 
+                project.</para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para><emphasis>
+                <ulink url='http://developer.berlios.de/projects/bitbake/'>
                 BitBake</ulink>:</emphasis> The tool used to process metadata.</para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para><emphasis>BitBake User Manual:</emphasis>
+            <listitem><para><emphasis>
+                BitBake User Manual:</emphasis>
                 A comprehensive guide to the BitBake tool.
-                You can find the BitBake User Manual in the <filename>bitbake/doc/manual</filename>
-                directory, which is found in the
+                You can find the BitBake User Manual in the 
+                <filename>bitbake/doc/manual</filename> directory, which is 
+                found in the
                 <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#source-directory'>Source Directory</ulink>.
                 </para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para><emphasis><ulink url='http://wiki.qemu.org/Index.html'>QEMU</ulink>:
-                </emphasis> An open source machine emulator and virtualizer.</para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para><emphasis>
+                <ulink url='http://wiki.qemu.org/Index.html'>QEMU</ulink>:
+                </emphasis> An open source machine emulator and virtualizer.
+                </para></listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
     </para>
 </section>
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