From 8f03c32040e4943830640ab8e51a03e2df972e9d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Date: Tue, 24 Oct 2017 12:26:00 -0700
Subject: documentation: Updated title page notes and author group

Made the title page notes consistent across the manual set.

Made the author group information consistent as well.  It is better
that authorship is seen as a third party and not tied to Intel
Corporation.

(From yocto-docs rev: 32cec087e384e1d92e3e84bbae5c6560a0af3136)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/mega-manual/mega-manual.xml | 30 ++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 file changed, 16 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)

(limited to 'documentation/mega-manual/mega-manual.xml')

diff --git a/documentation/mega-manual/mega-manual.xml b/documentation/mega-manual/mega-manual.xml
index 5550803be4..a8d535a1fe 100644
--- a/documentation/mega-manual/mega-manual.xml
+++ b/documentation/mega-manual/mega-manual.xml
@@ -85,27 +85,29 @@
            <note><title>Manual Notes</title>
                <itemizedlist>
                    <listitem><para>
-                       For the latest version of the Yocto Project
-                       Mega-Manual associated with this Yocto Project release
-                       (version &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION;),
-                       see the Yocto Project Mega-Manual from the
+                       This version of the
+                       <emphasis>Yocto Project Mega-Manual</emphasis>
+                       is for the &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION; release of the
+                       Yocto Project.
+                       To be sure you have the latest version of the manual
+                       for this release, use the manual from the
                        <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>.
                        </para></listitem>
                    <listitem><para>
-                       This version of the manual is version
-                       &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION;.
-                       For later releases of the Yocto Project (if they exist),
-                       go to the
+                       For manuals associated with other releases of the Yocto
+                       Project, go to the
                        <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>
                        and use the drop-down "Active Releases" button
-                       and choose the Yocto Project version for which you want
-                       the manual.
+                       and choose the manual associated with the desired
+                       Yocto Project.
                        </para></listitem>
                    <listitem><para>
-                       For an in-development version of the Yocto Project
-                       Mega-Manual, see
-                       <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_URL;/latest/mega-manual/mega-manual.html'></ulink>.
-                       </para></listitem>
+                        To report any inaccuracies or problems with this
+                        manual, send an email to the Yocto Project
+                        discussion group at
+                        <filename>yocto@yoctoproject.com</filename> or log into
+                        the freenode <filename>#yocto</filename> channel.
+                        </para></listitem>
                </itemizedlist>
            </note>
 
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