From 4df50d382763961501651eb4ca7d5dff11298479 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: "Robert P. J. Day" <rpjday@crashcourse.ca>
Date: Tue, 8 Jul 2014 15:11:06 +0300
Subject: bitbake: bitbake-user-manual-intro.xml: Minor edits to start of intro
 chapter

(Bitbake rev: 4e5db4bc460c12194a233dd283c273009606bb64)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 .../bitbake-user-manual-intro.xml                  | 25 +++++++++++++---------
 1 file changed, 15 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)

(limited to 'bitbake/doc')

diff --git a/bitbake/doc/bitbake-user-manual/bitbake-user-manual-intro.xml b/bitbake/doc/bitbake-user-manual/bitbake-user-manual-intro.xml
index af2400f53c..42ea19f3fc 100644
--- a/bitbake/doc/bitbake-user-manual/bitbake-user-manual-intro.xml
+++ b/bitbake/doc/bitbake-user-manual/bitbake-user-manual-intro.xml
@@ -35,17 +35,19 @@
                 <listitem><para>
                     BitBake executes tasks according to provided
                     metadata that builds up the tasks.
-                    Metadata is stored in recipe (<filename>.bb</filename>),
-                    recipe "append" (<filename>.bbappend</filename>),
-                    configuration (<filename>.conf</filename>), and class
-                    (<filename>.bbclass</filename>) files and provides
+                    Metadata is stored in recipe (<filename>.bb</filename>)
+                    and related recipe "append" (<filename>.bbappend</filename>)
+                    files, configuration (<filename>.conf</filename>) and
+                    underlying include (<filename>.inc</filename>) files, and
+                    in class (<filename>.bbclass</filename>) files.
+                    The metadata provides
                     BitBake with instructions on what tasks to run and
                     the dependencies between those tasks.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     BitBake includes a fetcher library for obtaining source
                     code from various places such as local files, source control
-                    systems, websites, or local files.
+                    systems, or websites.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     The instructions for each unit to be built (e.g. a piece
@@ -56,8 +58,8 @@
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     BitBake includes a client/server abstraction and can
-                    be used from a command line or used as a service over XMLRPC and
-                    has several different user interfaces.
+                    be used from a command line or used as a service over
+                    XML-RPC and has several different user interfaces.
                     </para></listitem>
             </itemizedlist>
         </para>
@@ -80,8 +82,11 @@
             Today, BitBake is the primary basis of the
             <ulink url="http://www.openembedded.org/">OpenEmbedded</ulink>
             project, which is being used to build and maintain Linux
-            distributions such as the Angstrom Distribution and which is used
-            as the build tool for Linux projects such as the Yocto Project.
+            distributions such as the
+            <ulink url='http://www.angstrom-distribution.org/'>Angstrom Distribution</ulink>,
+            and which is also being used as the build tool for Linux projects
+            such as the
+            <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;'>Yocto Project</ulink>.
         </para>
 
         <para>
@@ -152,7 +157,7 @@
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     Split metadata into layers and allow layers
-                    to override each other.
+                    to enhance or override other layers.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     Allow representation of a given set of input variables
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