From 75ac719f3e6c0b1305bcbc2bf5756d672e0ab975 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Date: Fri, 4 Oct 2013 08:32:17 -0700
Subject: dev-manual: Some minor edits to Introduction chapter.

(From yocto-docs rev: a9913d41b2bdf03abd2fe84149cb48b0d89940ba)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml | 38 ++++++++++++++-------------
 1 file changed, 20 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
index e213d75950..8923a1d2fb 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-intro.xml
@@ -24,17 +24,6 @@
             set up your host development system and build an image, which you
             find in the
             <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_QS_URL;'>Yocto Project Quick Start</ulink>.
-            <note>
-                By default, using the Yocto Project creates a Poky distribution.
-                However, you can create your own distribution by providing key
-                <link linkend='metadata'>Metadata</link>.
-                A good example is Angstrom, which has had a distribution
-                based on the Yocto Project since its inception.
-                Other examples include  commercial distributions like
-                Wind River Linux, Mentor Embedded Linux, and ENEA Linux.
-                See the "<link linkend='creating-your-own-distribution'>Creating Your Own Distribution</link>"
-                section for more information.
-            </note>
         </para>
 
         <para>
@@ -43,13 +32,25 @@
             reconfigure the kernel, and develop an application using the
             popular <trademark class='trade'>Eclipse</trademark> IDE.
         </para>
+
+        <note>
+            By default, using the Yocto Project creates a Poky distribution.
+            However, you can create your own distribution by providing key
+            <link linkend='metadata'>Metadata</link>.
+            A good example is Angstrom, which has had a distribution
+            based on the Yocto Project since its inception.
+            Other examples include  commercial distributions like
+            Wind River Linux, Mentor Embedded Linux, and ENEA Linux.
+            See the "<link linkend='creating-your-own-distribution'>Creating Your Own Distribution</link>"
+            section for more information.
+        </note>
     </section>
 
     <section id='what-this-manual-provides'>
         <title>What This Manual Provides</title>
 
         <para>
-            The following list describes what you can get from this guide:
+            The following list describes what you can get from this manual:
             <itemizedlist>
                 <listitem><para>Information that lets you get set
                     up to develop using the Yocto Project.</para></listitem>
@@ -75,17 +76,17 @@
         <para>
             This manual will not give you the following:
             <itemizedlist>
-                <listitem><para>Step-by-step instructions if those instructions exist in other Yocto
-                    Project documentation.
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>Step-by-step instructions when those instructions exist in other Yocto
+                    Project documentation:</emphasis>
                     For example, the Yocto Project Application Developer's Guide contains detailed
                     instructions on how to run the
-                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_ADT_URL;#installing-the-adt'>Installing the ADT and Toolchains</ulink>,
+                    <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_ADT_URL;#installing-the-adt'>ADT Installer</ulink>,
                     which is used to set up a cross-development environment.</para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para>Reference material.
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>Reference material:</emphasis>
                     This type of material resides in an appropriate reference manual.
                     For example, system variables are documented in the
                     <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;'>Yocto Project Reference Manual</ulink>.</para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para>Detailed public information that is not specific to the Yocto Project.
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>Detailed public information that is not specific to the Yocto Project:</emphasis>
                     For example, exhaustive information on how to use Git is covered better through the
                     Internet than in this manual.</para></listitem>
             </itemizedlist>
@@ -109,7 +110,8 @@
                     with the Yocto Project and quickly begin building an image.</para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>
                     <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_REF_URL;'>Yocto Project Reference Manual</ulink>:</emphasis> This manual is a reference
-                    guide to the OpenEmbedded build system known as "Poky."
+                    guide to the OpenEmbedded build system, which is based on BitBake.
+                    The build system is sometimes referred to as "Poky".
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para><emphasis>
                     <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_ADT_URL;'>Yocto Project Application Developer's Guide</ulink>:</emphasis>
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