From 67f4fd4ffa4144174f146e19f2c07a950168330d Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Date: Thu, 4 Apr 2013 07:25:09 -0700
Subject: ref-manual: Edits to buildhistory patch 1 of 5.

I did a bit of cleanup on the text from Paul's patch number 1.
Just some active voice stuff mainly.

(From yocto-docs rev: f08fa3da997e53c587e3f17ef908e41594654db3)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml | 44 ++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 24 insertions(+), 20 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
index c8bee36e96..3b0940f826 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/usingpoky.xml
@@ -635,15 +635,15 @@
             <title>Build History SDK Information</title>
             <para>
                 Build history collects similar information on the contents
-                of SDKs (for example, <filename>meta-toolchain</filename>
+                of SDKs (e.g., <filename>meta-toolchain</filename>
                 or <filename>bitbake -c populate_sdk imagename</filename>)
-                to that which it collects for images.
-                The files produced for each SDK are as follows:
+                as compared to information it collects for images.
+                The following list shows the files produced for each SDK:
                 <itemizedlist>
                     <listitem><para><filename>files-in-sdk.txt:</filename>
                         A list of files in the SDK with permissions,
                         owner, group, size, and symlink information.
-                        This includes both the host and target parts
+                        This list includes both the host and target parts
                         of the SDK.
                         </para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para><filename>sdk-info.txt:</filename>
@@ -651,16 +651,19 @@
                         about the SDK.
                         See the following listing example for more information.
                         </para></listitem>
-                    <listitem><para>Under each of the <filename>host</filename> and 
-                        <filename>target</filename> directories (for the portions of the
-                        SDK that run on the host and on the target respectively):
+                    <listitem><para>The following information appears under
+                        each of the <filename>host</filename> 
+                        and <filename>target</filename> directories 
+                        for the portions of the SDK that run on the host and 
+                        on the target, respectively:
                         <itemizedlist>
                             <listitem><para><filename>depends.dot:</filename>
-                                Dependency graph for the SDK that is
+                                Dependency graph for the SDK that is 
                                 compatible with <filename>graphviz</filename>.
                                 </para></listitem>
                             <listitem><para><filename>installed-package-names.txt:</filename>
-                                A list of installed packages by name only.</para></listitem>
+                                A list of installed packages by name only.
+                                </para></listitem>
                             <listitem><para><filename>installed-package-sizes.txt:</filename>
                                 A list of installed packages ordered by size.
                                 </para></listitem>
@@ -675,21 +678,22 @@
             <para>
                 Here is an example of <filename>sdk-info.txt</filename>:
                 <literallayout class='monospaced'>
-DISTRO = poky
-DISTRO_VERSION = 1.3+snapshot-20130327
-SDK_NAME = poky-eglibc-i686-arm
-SDK_VERSION = 1.3+snapshot
-SDKMACHINE = 
-SDKIMAGE_FEATURES = dev-pkgs dbg-pkgs
-BAD_RECOMMENDATIONS = 
-SDKSIZE = 352712
+     DISTRO = poky
+     DISTRO_VERSION = 1.3+snapshot-20130327
+     SDK_NAME = poky-eglibc-i686-arm
+     SDK_VERSION = 1.3+snapshot
+     SDKMACHINE = 
+     SDKIMAGE_FEATURES = dev-pkgs dbg-pkgs
+     BAD_RECOMMENDATIONS = 
+     SDKSIZE = 352712
                 </literallayout>
                 Other than <filename>SDKSIZE</filename>, which is the
                 total size of the files in the SDK in Kbytes, the
-                name-value pairs are variables that may have influenced the
+                name-value pairs are variables that might have influenced the
                 content of the SDK.
-                This information is often useful when you are trying to determine
-                why a change in the package or file listings has occurred.
+                This information is often useful when you are trying to 
+                determine why a change in the package or file listings 
+                has occurred.
             </para>
         </section>
 
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