From 2d3a811338f20f9cd7403064be6e8c395dc1eac5 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Date: Wed, 22 Aug 2018 15:42:01 -0700
Subject: dev-manual: Updates to "Locating Yocto Project Source Files"

Some edits for clarity and fixes to the procedures regarding
the DOWNLOADS page.

(From yocto-docs rev: 98ee61f7797c9352a1eff060b98a3e2e74a1da6f)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>
---
 documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml | 33 +++++++++++++++++----------
 1 file changed, 21 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
index a8b48bdf03..7058c2863e 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
@@ -671,8 +671,8 @@
     <title>Locating Yocto Project Source Files</title>
 
     <para>
-        This section contains procedures related to locating Yocto Project
-        files.
+        This section shows you how to locate and access the
+        source files that ship with the Yocto Project.
         You establish and use these local files to work on projects.
         <note><title>Notes</title>
             <itemizedlist>
@@ -719,7 +719,7 @@
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Select the Repository:</emphasis>
-                    Click on the repository in which you are interested (i.e.
+                    Click on the repository in which you are interested (e.g.
                     <filename>poky</filename>).
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
@@ -753,6 +753,7 @@
                 The procedure in this section exists should you desire a
                 tarball snapshot of any given component.
             </note>
+            Follow these steps to locate and download a particular tarball:
             <orderedlist>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Access the Index of Releases:</emphasis>
@@ -802,7 +803,10 @@
             uses a "DOWNLOADS" page from which you can locate and download
             tarballs of any Yocto Project release.
             Rather than Git repositories, these files represent snapshot
-            tarballs.
+            tarballs similar to the tarballs located in the Index of Releases
+            described in the
+            "<link linkend='accessing-index-of-releases'>Accessing Index of Releases</link>"
+            section.
             <note><title>Tip</title>
                 The recommended method for accessing Yocto Project
                 components is to use Git to clone a repository and work from
@@ -820,18 +824,23 @@
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Get to the Downloads Area:</emphasis>
                     Select the "DOWNLOADS" item from the pull-down
-                    "SOFTWARE" tab menu.
+                    "SOFTWARE" tab menu near the top of the page.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Select a Yocto Project Release:</emphasis>
                     Use the menu next to "RELEASE" to display and choose
-                    a Yocto Project release (e.g. sumo, rocko, pyro, and
-                    so forth.
-                    For a "map" of Yocto Project releases to version numbers,
-                    see the
-                    <ulink url='https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/Releases'>Releases</ulink>
-                    wiki page.
-                    </para></listitem>
+                    a recent or past supported Yocto Project release
+                    (e.g. &DISTRO_NAME_NO_CAP;,
+                    &DISTRO_NAME_NO_CAP_MINUS_ONE;, and so forth).
+                    <note><title>Tip</title>
+                        For a "map" of Yocto Project releases to version
+                        numbers, see the
+                        <ulink url='https://wiki.yoctoproject.org/wiki/Releases'>Releases</ulink>
+                        wiki page.
+                    </note>
+                    You can use the "RELEASE ARCHIVE" link to reveal a menu of
+                    all Yocto Project releases.
+                </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Download Tools or Board Support Packages (BSPs):</emphasis>
                     From the "DOWNLOADS" page, you can download tools or
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