1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions
diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
index f2912b1c1b..296c59bcde 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
        <para>
            A BSP is a package of recipes that, when applied, during a build results in 
-            an image you can run on a particular board.  
+            an image that you can run on a particular board.  
            Thus, the package, when compiled into the new image, supports the operation of the board.  
        </para>
@@ -61,8 +61,8 @@
        </note>
        <para>
-            The remainder of this section presents the basic steps to create a BSP basing it on an 
+            The remainder of this section presents the basic steps used to create a BSP 
-            existing BSP that ships with the Yocto Project.
+            based on an existing BSP that ships with the Yocto Project.
            You can reference the "<link linkend='dev-manual-bsp-appendix'>BSP Development Example</link>"
            appendix for a detailed example that uses the Crown Bay BSP as a base BSP from which to start.
        </para>
@@ -85,12 +85,12 @@
                <listitem><para><emphasis>Establish a local copy of the Yocto Project files on your 
                    system</emphasis>:  You need to have the Yocto Project files available on your host system. 
                    Having the Yocto Project files on your system gives you access to the build
-                    process and tools you need.
+                    process and to the tools you need.
                    For information on how to get these files, see the
                    "<link linkend='getting-setup'>Getting Setup</link>" section.</para></listitem>
                <listitem><para><emphasis>Establish a local copy of the base BSP files</emphasis>:  Having    
                    the BSP files on your system gives you access to the build
-                    process and tools you need for creating a BSP.
+                    process and to the tools you need for creating a BSP.
                    For information on how to get these files, see the
                    "<link linkend='getting-setup'>Getting Setup</link>" section.</para></listitem>    
                <listitem><para><emphasis>Choose a Yocto Project-supported BSP as your base BSP</emphasis>:

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml index f2912b1c1b..296c59bcde 100644 --- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml +++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@
51		51
52	<para>	52	<para>
53	A BSP is a package of recipes that, when applied, during a build results in	53	A BSP is a package of recipes that, when applied, during a build results in
54	an image you can run on a particular board.	54	an image that you can run on a particular board.
55	Thus, the package, when compiled into the new image, supports the operation of the board.	55	Thus, the package, when compiled into the new image, supports the operation of the board.
56	</para>	56	</para>
57		57
@@ -61,8 +61,8 @@
61	</note>	61	</note>
62		62
63	<para>	63	<para>
64	The remainder of this section presents the basic steps to create a BSP basing it on an	64	The remainder of this section presents the basic steps used to create a BSP
65	existing BSP that ships with the Yocto Project.	65	based on an existing BSP that ships with the Yocto Project.
66	You can reference the "<link linkend='dev-manual-bsp-appendix'>BSP Development Example</link>"	66	You can reference the "<link linkend='dev-manual-bsp-appendix'>BSP Development Example</link>"
67	appendix for a detailed example that uses the Crown Bay BSP as a base BSP from which to start.	67	appendix for a detailed example that uses the Crown Bay BSP as a base BSP from which to start.
68	</para>	68	</para>
@@ -85,12 +85,12 @@
85	<listitem><para><emphasis>Establish a local copy of the Yocto Project files on your	85	<listitem><para><emphasis>Establish a local copy of the Yocto Project files on your
86	system</emphasis>: You need to have the Yocto Project files available on your host system.	86	system</emphasis>: You need to have the Yocto Project files available on your host system.
87	Having the Yocto Project files on your system gives you access to the build	87	Having the Yocto Project files on your system gives you access to the build
88	process and tools you need.	88	process and to the tools you need.
89	For information on how to get these files, see the	89	For information on how to get these files, see the
90	"<link linkend='getting-setup'>Getting Setup</link>" section.</para></listitem>	90	"<link linkend='getting-setup'>Getting Setup</link>" section.</para></listitem>
91	<listitem><para><emphasis>Establish a local copy of the base BSP files</emphasis>: Having	91	<listitem><para><emphasis>Establish a local copy of the base BSP files</emphasis>: Having
92	the BSP files on your system gives you access to the build	92	the BSP files on your system gives you access to the build
93	process and tools you need for creating a BSP.	93	process and to the tools you need for creating a BSP.
94	For information on how to get these files, see the	94	For information on how to get these files, see the
95	"<link linkend='getting-setup'>Getting Setup</link>" section.</para></listitem>	95	"<link linkend='getting-setup'>Getting Setup</link>" section.</para></listitem>
96	<listitem><para><emphasis>Choose a Yocto Project-supported BSP as your base BSP</emphasis>:	96	<listitem><para><emphasis>Choose a Yocto Project-supported BSP as your base BSP</emphasis>: