dev-manual: Edits to "Workflow Using the ADT and Eclipse" section.

(From yocto-docs rev: 2fec6bbe8b89ce41b4fcd40f2ebaa5fa3fe3687e)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

1 files changed, 9 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
index f9efb8b533..452f97694b 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-model.xml
@@ -513,12 +513,12 @@
 
         <para>
             <orderedlist>
-                <listitem><para><emphasis>Prepare the Host System for the Yocto Project</emphasis>:
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>Prepare the host system for the Yocto Project</emphasis>:
                     See
                     "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_QS_URL;#the-linux-distro'>The Linux Distribution</ulink>" and
                     "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_QS_URL;#packages'>The Packages</ulink>" sections both
                     in the Yocto Project Quick Start for requirements.</para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para><emphasis>Secure the Yocto Project Kernel Target Image</emphasis>:
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>Secure the Yocto Project kernel target image</emphasis>:
                     You must have a target kernel image that has been built using the OpenEmbedded
                     build system.</para>
                     <para>Depending on whether the Yocto Project has a pre-built image that matches your target
@@ -550,14 +550,14 @@
                     The ADT provides a target-specific cross-development toolchain, the root filesystem,
                     the QEMU emulator, and other tools that can help you develop your application.
                     While it is possible to get these pieces separately, the ADT Installer provides an
-                    easy method.
+                    easy, inclusive method.
                     You can get these pieces by running an ADT installer script, which is configurable.
                     For information on how to install the ADT, see the
                     "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_ADT_URL;#using-the-adt-installer'>Using the ADT Installer</ulink>"
                     section
                     in the Yocto Project Application Developer's Guide.</para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para><emphasis>If Applicable, Secure the Target Root Filesystem
-                    and the Cross-development Toolchain</emphasis>:
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>If applicable, secure the target root filesystem
+                    and the Cross-development toolchain</emphasis>:
                     If you choose not to install the ADT using the ADT Installer,
                     you need to find and download the appropriate root filesystem and
                     the cross-development toolchain.</para>
@@ -565,7 +565,7 @@
                     for the kernel image.
                     Depending on the type of image you are running, the root filesystem you need differs.
                     For example, if you are developing an application that runs on an image that
-                    supports Sato, you need to get root filesystem that supports Sato.</para>
+                    supports Sato, you need to get a root filesystem that supports Sato.</para>
                     <para>You can find the cross-development toolchains at
                     <ulink url='&YOCTO_TOOLCHAIN_DL_URL;'><filename>toolchains</filename></ulink>.
                     Be sure to get the correct toolchain for your development host and your
@@ -578,20 +578,20 @@
                     the correct toolchain based on your host development system and your target
                     architecture.
                     </para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para><emphasis>Create and Build your Application</emphasis>:
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>Create and build your application</emphasis>:
                     At this point, you need to have source files for your application.
                     Once you have the files, you can use the Eclipse IDE to import them and build the
                     project.
                     If you are not using Eclipse, you need to use the cross-development tools you have
                     installed to create the image.</para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para><emphasis>Deploy the Image with the Application</emphasis>:
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>Deploy the image with the application</emphasis>:
                     If you are using the Eclipse IDE, you can deploy your image to the hardware or to
                     QEMU through the project's preferences.
                     If you are not using the Eclipse IDE, then you need to deploy the application
                     to the hardware using other methods.
                     Or, if you are using QEMU, you need to use that tool and load your image in for testing.
                     </para></listitem>
-                <listitem><para><emphasis>Test and Debug the Application</emphasis>:
+                <listitem><para><emphasis>Test and debug the application</emphasis>:
                     Once your application is deployed, you need to test it.
                     Within the Eclipse IDE, you can use the debugging environment along with the
                     set of user-space tools installed along with the ADT to debug your application.