documentation: Updated title page notes and author group

Made the title page notes consistent across the manual set.

Made the author group information consistent as well.  It is better
that authorship is seen as a third party and not tied to Intel
Corporation.

(From yocto-docs rev: 32cec087e384e1d92e3e84bbae5c6560a0af3136)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

1 files changed, 19 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/toaster-manual/toaster-manual.xml b/documentation/toaster-manual/toaster-manual.xml
index 2fdc447a8e..506018302a 100644
--- a/documentation/toaster-manual/toaster-manual.xml
+++ b/documentation/toaster-manual/toaster-manual.xml
@@ -22,11 +22,11 @@
 
         <authorgroup>
             <author>
-                <firstname>Scott</firstname> <surname>Rifenbark</surname>
+                <firstname>Kristi</firstname> <surname>Rifenbark</surname>
                 <affiliation>
-                    <orgname>Intel Corporation</orgname>
+                    <orgname>Scotty's Documentation Services, INC</orgname>
                 </affiliation>
-                <email>srifenbark@gmail.com</email>
+                <email>kristi@buzzcollectivemarketing.com</email>
             </author>
         </authorgroup>
 
@@ -76,27 +76,29 @@
            <note><title>Manual Notes</title>
                <itemizedlist>
                    <listitem><para>
-                       For the latest version of the Yocto Project Toaster
-                       User Manual associated with this Yocto Project release
-                       (version &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION;),
-                       see the Yocto Project Toaster User Manual from the
+                       This version of the
+                       <emphasis>Toaster User Manual</emphasis>
+                       is for the &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION; release of the
+                       Yocto Project.
+                       To be sure you have the latest version of the manual
+                       for this release, use the manual from the
                        <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>.
                        </para></listitem>
                    <listitem><para>
-                       This version of the manual is version
-                       &YOCTO_DOC_VERSION;.
-                       For later releases of the Yocto Project (if they exist),
-                       go to the
+                       For manuals associated with other releases of the Yocto
+                       Project, go to the
                        <ulink url='&YOCTO_HOME_URL;/documentation'>Yocto Project documentation page</ulink>
                        and use the drop-down "Active Releases" button
-                       and choose the Yocto Project version for which you want
-                       the manual.
+                       and choose the manual associated with the desired
+                       Yocto Project.
                        </para></listitem>
                    <listitem><para>
-                       For an in-development version of the Yocto Project
-                       Toaster User Manual, see
-                       <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_URL;/latest/toaster-manual/toaster-manual.html'></ulink>.
-                       </para></listitem>
+                        To report any inaccuracies or problems with this
+                        manual, send an email to the Yocto Project
+                        discussion group at
+                        <filename>yocto@yoctoproject.com</filename> or log into
+                        the freenode <filename>#yocto</filename> channel.
+                        </para></listitem>
                </itemizedlist>
            </note>