ref-manual: Tweaks to a patch from Robert P. J. Day

I altered three areas from the previous patch submitted and
applied from Robert P. J. Day.  Two minor wording changes and
removal of negative language.

(From yocto-docs rev: 0212b01f82637c3498f26bce57e98508c84799c5)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 4 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml b/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
index f863c4cfb7..4d1c2e3f4e 100644
--- a/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
+++ b/documentation/ref-manual/technical-details.xml
@@ -60,7 +60,8 @@
             and is responsible for parsing the
             <ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#metadata'>Metadata</ulink>,
             generating a list of tasks from it, and then executing those tasks.
-            To see a list of the options BitBake supports, use either of:
+            To see a list of the options BitBake supports, use either of
+            the following commands:
             <literallayout class='monospaced'>
      $ bitbake -h
      $ bitbake --help
@@ -112,13 +113,13 @@
             The <filename>.bb</filename> files are usually referred to as "recipes."
             In general, a recipe contains information about a single piece of software.
             This information includes the location from which to download the
-            pristine source, any source patches to be applied to that source
-            (if any are needed), which special configuration options to apply,
+            unaltered source, any source patches to be applied to that source
+            (if needed), which special configuration options to apply,
             how to compile the source files, and how to package the compiled output.
         </para>
 
         <para>
-            The term "package" is sometimes (confusingly) used to refer to recipes. However,
+            The term "package" is sometimes used to refer to recipes. However,
             since the word "package" is used for the packaged output from the OpenEmbedded
             build system (i.e. <filename>.ipk</filename> or <filename>.deb</filename> files),
             this document avoids using the term "package" when referring to recipes.