getting-started: Review updates for minor wordings and links

(From yocto-docs rev: 51dc5dd5362a8e6d6d558a566554bec34764227f)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <srifenbark@gmail.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

2 files changed, 17 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-development-environment.xml b/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-development-environment.xml
index 9bbd8e062f..7bcf87ffd9 100644
--- a/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-development-environment.xml
+++ b/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-development-environment.xml
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
         Open source projects conceptually have differing concurrent agendas,
         approaches, and production.
         These facets of the development process can come from anyone in the
-        public (community) that has a stake in the software project.
+        public (community) who has a stake in the software project.
         The open source environment contains new copyright, licensing, domain,
         and consumer issues that differ from the more traditional development
         environment.
diff --git a/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml b/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml
index f39cd70c74..6941db68b9 100644
--- a/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml
+++ b/documentation/getting-started/getting-started-yp-intro.xml
@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@
                         </para></listitem>
                     <listitem><para>
                         <emphasis>Binary Reproducibility:</emphasis>
-                        The Yocto Project you to be very specific about
+                        The Yocto Project allows you to be very specific about
                         dependencies and achieves very high percentages of
                         binary reproducibility (e.g. 99.8% for
                         <filename>core-image-minimal</filename>).
@@ -186,7 +186,7 @@
                     <listitem><para>
                         <emphasis>License Manifest:</emphasis>
                         The Yocto Project provides a license manifest for
-                        review by people that need to track the use of open
+                        review by people who need to track the use of open
                         source licenses (e.g.legal teams).
                         </para></listitem>
                 </itemizedlist>
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@
                     <listitem><para>
                         <emphasis>Project Workflow Could Be Confusing:</emphasis>
                         The Yocto Project workflow could be confusing if you
-                        used to traditional desktop and server software
+                        are used to traditional desktop and server software
                         development.
                         In a desktop development environment, mechanisms exist
                         to easily pull and install new packages, which are
@@ -546,7 +546,7 @@
                         The main purpose of the system is to help you
                         manage the recipes you maintain and to offer a dynamic
                         overview of the project.
-                        The Recipe Reporting System tracks is built on top
+                        The Recipe Reporting System is built on top
                         the of OpenEmbedded Metadata Index, which is a website
                         that indexes layers for the OpenEmbedded build system.
                         </para></listitem>
@@ -883,8 +883,10 @@
                     familiar shell of a supported Linux distribution.</para>
 
                     <para>For information on how to set up a Build Host on
-                    a system running Linux as its native operating system, see
-                    TBD.
+                    a system running Linux as its native operating system,
+                    see the
+                    "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#setting-up-a-native-linux-host'>Setting Up a Native Linux Host</ulink>"
+                    section in the Yocto Project Development Tasks Manual.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>CROss PlatformS (CROPS):</emphasis>
@@ -909,7 +911,9 @@
                     on a system natively running Linux.</para>
 
                     <para>For information on how to set up a Build Host with
-                    CROPS, see TBD.
+                    CROPS, see the
+                    "<ulink url='&YOCTO_DOCS_DEV_URL;#setting-up-to-use-crops'>Setting Up to Use CROss PlatformS (CROPS)</ulink>"
+                    section in the Yocto Project Development Tasks Manual.
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Toaster:</emphasis>
@@ -969,12 +973,12 @@
 
         <para>
             Poky is a combined repository of BitBake, OpenEmbedded-Core
-            (found in <filename>meta</filename>),
+            (which is found in <filename>meta</filename>),
             <filename>meta-poky</filename>,
             <filename>meta-yocto-bsp</filename>, and documentation provided
             all together and known to work well together.
-            You can view the Poky repository as part of the
-            <ulink url='&YOCTO_GIT_URL;'>Source Repositories</ulink>.
+            You can view these items that make up the Poky repository in the
+            <ulink url='&YOCTO_GIT_URL;/cgit/cgit.cgi/poky/tree/'>Source Repositories</ulink>.
             <note>
                 If you are interested in all the contents of the
                 <filename>poky</filename> Git repository, see the
@@ -1250,7 +1254,7 @@
                     developed by the OpenEmbedded community that has been
                     pared down into a smaller, core set of continuously
                     validated recipes.
-                    The result is a tightly controlled and an quality-assured
+                    The result is a tightly controlled and quality-assured
                     core set of recipes.</para>
 
                     <para>You can see the Metadata in the
@@ -1285,8 +1289,7 @@
                     </para></listitem>
                 <listitem><para>
                     <emphasis>Poky:</emphasis>
-                    Poky, which is pronounced <emphasis>Pock</emphasis>-ee,
-                    is a reference embedded distribution and a reference
+                    Poky is a reference embedded distribution and a reference
                     test configuration.
                     Poky provides the following:
                     <itemizedlist>