documentation/dev-manual: Scott Garman's review comments.

Made several editing corrections for various terms and phrasings based on
Scott Garman's review.

(From yocto-docs rev: a21ba80151ce82683d45cd67ddb0728d779b007a)

Signed-off-by: Scott Rifenbark <scott.m.rifenbark@intel.com>
Signed-off-by: Richard Purdie <richard.purdie@linuxfoundation.org>

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 7 deletions

diff --git a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
index fbf16813c3..48f98b50b5 100644
--- a/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
+++ b/documentation/dev-manual/dev-manual-start.xml
@@ -23,7 +23,7 @@
     <title>Introducing the Yocto Project</title>
 
     <para>
-        The Yocto Project is an open-source collaboration project focused on embedded Linux developers.  
+        The Yocto Project is an open-source collaboration project focused on embedded Linux development.  
         The project provides a recent Linux kernel along with a set of system commands, libraries, 
         and system components suitable for the embedded developer.  
         The Yocto Project also features the Sato reference User Interface should you be dealing with 
@@ -48,10 +48,10 @@
             <listitem><para><emphasis>Host System:</emphasis>  You need a recent release of Fedora, 
                 OpenSUSE, Debian, or Ubuntu.  
                 You should have a reasonably current Linux-based host system.  
-                You should also have about 100 gigabytes of free disk space if you plan on building 
-                images.</para></listitem>
-            <listitem><para><emphasis>Packages:</emphasis>  Depending on your host system (Debian-based or RPM-based),
-                you need certain packages.  
+                You should also have about 100 gigabytes of free disk space for building images.
+                </para></listitem>
+            <listitem><para><emphasis>Packages:</emphasis>  The Yocto Project requires certain packages
+                exist on your development system.  
                 See the <ulink url='http://www.yoctoproject.org/docs/yocto-quick-start/yocto-project-qs.html#packages'>
                 The Packages</ulink> section in the Yocto Project Quick start for the exact package 
                 requirements.</para></listitem>
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@
                 script.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para>Make sure the <filename>conf/local.conf</filename> configuration file is set 
                 up how you want it.  
-                This file defines the target machine architecture and and other build configurations.</para></listitem>
+                This file defines the target machine architecture and and other build options.</para></listitem>
             <listitem><para>Build the image using the BitBake command.  
                 If you want information on Bitbake, see the user manual at 
                 <ulink url='http://docs.openembedded.org/bitbake/html'></ulink>.</para></listitem>
@@ -253,7 +253,7 @@
     <title>Using Pre-Built Binaries and QEMU</title>
 
     <para>
-        Another option you have to get started is to use a pre-built binary.  
+        Another option you have to get started is to use pre-built binaries.  
         This scenario is ideal for developing software applications to run on your target hardware.  
         To do this you need to install the stand-alone Yocto toolchain tarball and then download the 
         pre-built kernel that you will boot using the QEMU emulator.