From 1f41cc7a9bb3f13d5fc83241d4b9c7161d5c9693 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Thomas Lundström <thomas.lundstrom@enea.com>
Date: Tue, 14 Jun 2016 15:21:01 +0200
Subject: Updated after review

---
 .../doc/getting_enea_linux.xml                     | 27 ++++++++++++++--------
 .../doc/main_changes.xml                           |  9 ++++----
 doc/gen_known_issues.py                            |  5 +---
 3 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
index 2d0f9c2..11d0475 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/getting_enea_linux.xml
@@ -18,13 +18,14 @@
   <section id="relinfo-getting-source">
     <title>Getting the Source</title>
 
-    <para>For platform developers, this Enea Linux release is available for
-    cloning from a set of GIT repositories. E.g. git.enea.se &amp;
-    git.enea.com. To manage the different repositories, Google's repo tool is
-    used. The basic idea is to store a list with (repo-URL, version) tuples in
-    a separate file, known as the manifest. The repo tool is then used to
-    clone the specified versions of the listed repositories. See <ulink
-    url="&lt;link to some description&gt;">TBD</ulink> for more info.</para>
+    <para>The source for this Enea Linux release is available for cloning from
+    a set of Git repositories. To manage the different repositories, Google's
+    repo tool is used. The basic idea is to store a list with (repo-URL,
+    version) tuples in a separate file, known as the manifest. The repo tool
+    is then used to traverse the list and clone the specified versions of the
+    repositories. See <ulink
+    url="https://code.google.com/p/git-repo/">https://code.google.com/p/git-repo/</ulink>
+    for more info.</para>
 
     <para>To use repo tool to download the source for Enea Linux, follow the
     steps below:</para>
@@ -35,7 +36,8 @@
         instructions below:</para>
 
         <para><programlisting>$ curl https://storage.googleapis.com/git-repo-downloads/repo &gt; ~/bin/repo
-$ chmod a+x ~/bin/repo</programlisting></para>
+$ chmod a+x ~/bin/repo</programlisting>The instruction assumes that ~/bin
+        exists and is included in the PATH variable.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
@@ -49,7 +51,9 @@ $ repo init -u	git://git.enea.se/linux/manifests/el6-standard.git \
 $ repo sync</programlisting></para>
 
         <para>The URI and 'refs/tags/EL6' specifies the location and version
-        of the repository where the manifest file is stored.</para>
+        of the repository where the manifest file is stored. The repo tool
+        assumes that the argument after '-b' is a branch, and to force
+        interpretation as a tag, the prefix refs/tags/ is needed.</para>
 
         <para>The parameter &lt;manifest file&gt; depends on the target. See
         the following table:</para>
@@ -111,5 +115,10 @@ $ repo sync</programlisting></para>
     command:</para>
 
     <programlisting>$ repo manifest</programlisting>
+
+    <remark>The UG should be updated with instructions on how to add
+    customisations. That section should also contain some more info about the
+    manifest: The manifest templates, using a branch instead of the tag EL6,
+    ... When this is done a reference from here should be added.</remark>
   </section>
 </chapter>
\ No newline at end of file
diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
index e1a20dd..b1e63f5 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/main_changes.xml
@@ -19,11 +19,11 @@
         href="../../s_docsrc_common/pardoc-distro.xml"
         xmlns:xi="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"
         xpointer="element(Yocto_VER/1)" />). See <ulink
-        url="???">https://www.yoctoproject.org/downloads/core/krogoth21</ulink>.</para>
+        url="https://www.yoctoproject.org/downloads/core/krogoth21">https://www.yoctoproject.org/downloads/core/krogoth21</ulink>.</para>
       </listitem>
 
       <listitem>
-        <para>Introduction of the repo tool to manage the GIT
+        <para>Introduction of the repo tool to manage the Git
         repositories.</para>
       </listitem>
 
@@ -32,8 +32,9 @@
       </listitem>
     </itemizedlist>
 
-    <para>For details, see the GIT logs for the repositories specified in the
-    manifest files. See <xref linkend="relinfo-getting-source" />.</para>
+    <para>For details, see the Git logs for the repositories specified in the
+    manifest files. See <xref linkend="relinfo-getting-source" /> for more inf
+    on repos and the manifest.</para>
   </section>
 
   <section id="relinfo-fixed">
diff --git a/doc/gen_known_issues.py b/doc/gen_known_issues.py
index 6b8ca8c..a400577 100755
--- a/doc/gen_known_issues.py
+++ b/doc/gen_known_issues.py
@@ -47,10 +47,7 @@ print '  <para>'
 print '    This section lists open bugs in Jira. Extracted at %s.' % time_str
 print '  </para>'
 print
-print '  <remark>Jira query: (project = "Linux CR"'
-print '  and issuetype = Bug'
-print '  and affectedVersion = "Enea Linux 6"'
-print '  and resolution = Unresolved)</remark>'
+print '  <remark>Jira query: (%s)</remark>' % "\n    and ".join(conditions)
 print
 print '  <informaltable>'
 print '    <tgroup cols="2">'
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