From cb6311874f7fe149a9500112e74d991d326319b4 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Martin Borg <martin.borg@enea.com>
Date: Mon, 4 Jul 2016 10:39:21 +0200
Subject: release-info: updates, fix review comments
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Signed-off-by: Martin Borg <martin.borg@enea.com>
Signed-off-by: Nora Björklund <nora.bjorklund@enea.com>
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 .../doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml             | 25 ++++++----------------
 1 file changed, 7 insertions(+), 18 deletions(-)

(limited to 'doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml')

diff --git a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
index 0b76d56..0cd0b13 100644
--- a/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
+++ b/doc/book-enea-linux-release-info/doc/known_bugs_and_limitations.xml
@@ -5,29 +5,18 @@
   <title>Known Problems in This Release</title>
 
   <para>The open source projects are continuously working on correcting
-  reported problems. Corrections to bugs detected by Enea have been
-  upstreamed, and the corrections been included in Enea Linux regardless of
+  reported problems. Corrections to bugs detected by Enea are submitted
+  upstream, and the corrections are included in Enea Linux regardless of
   when they will be included by the open source project. Remaining issues are
-  listed below, and workarounds to some of the problems are described in
-  chapter <emphasis>Troubleshooting</emphasis> in the <olink
-  targetdoc="book_enea_linux_users_guide"
-  targetptr="book_enea_linux_users_guide"><trademark
-  class="registered">Enea</trademark> Linux User's Guide</olink>.</para>
+  listed below.</para>
 
   <section id="bugs-limitations-yocto">
     <title>Yocto</title>
 
-    <para>Open source projects often use bug databases for much more than
-    tracking bugs. The Yocto Project's Bugzilla database also functions as a
-    feature tracking program, both for the current release and for future
-    releases, and a way to track non-software issues, like documentation
-    changes.</para>
-
-    <para>The following page shows a sampling of the database: <ulink
-    url="https://www.yoctoproject.org/tools-resources/bugs">https://www.yoctoproject.org/tools-resources/bugs</ulink>.</para>
-
-    <para>For the full database, visit <ulink
-    url="https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org">https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org</ulink>.</para>
+    <para>The Yocto Project community uses a Bugzilla database to track
+    information on reported bugs and other issues:
+    <ulink url="https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org">
+    https://bugzilla.yoctoproject.org</ulink>.</para>
   </section>
 
   <section condition="hidden" id="bugs-limitations-sdk">
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